Comments For Biker Boy(s)
MochaB (Signed) on Oct 12, 2008 09:53 pm (Part Four: I)
i must be messed up in the head cause i'm not mad at justin, i'm mad at briana! haha. not mad i guess, but i'm just like, "girl!" haha. i mean...you know it had to be hard to watch the man you love kill somebody, but that somebody pretty much just told you he would kill your butt if he gets the chance! i mean...for justin to let him go would be like they just made an appointment and wrote it down in briana's planner for brad to come kill her...right? hahaha!! i'm stupid. haha. but man...all her fussing at him and stuff, that was time that needed to be used to get away. then the cops start coming and she's like i love you, come on, let's go. gaaaah! ha. ok. but yeah, it's understandable for her to react that way since she's not used to things like that, but i just wanted to sceam, "leave now, fuss later!" seriously though, what happened at the end...that got to me in a good sad way. so since this was a flashback, i can't wait to see what the deal is now. *sigh* update soon i guess...even though that means it'll be over...*sigh* haha. :o)
Author's Response: Oh man I feel you on everything you just said! LOL Bri and Justin are quite the pair eh? I was thinking about making them have a getaway, but then I will say this, if it was a long story i would have maybe gone with that instead of Justin staying and getting caught. lol. But, I'm glad you enjoyed it and was so into it! hehe. And yeh, the last part is coming and it will be the end. :(. I'm sad to see this one go too. In fact, I totally wrote a new ending compared to the one I had originally planned out just for you guys. :) thanks for the great feedback.
Author's Response: Oh man I feel you on everything you just said! LOL Bri and Justin are quite the pair eh? I was thinking about making them have a getaway, but then I will say this, if it was a long story i would have maybe gone with that instead of Justin staying and getting caught. lol. But, I'm glad you enjoyed it and was so into it! hehe. And yeh, the last part is coming and it will be the end. :(. I'm sad to see this one go too. In fact, I totally wrote a new ending compared to the one I had originally planned out just for you guys. :) thanks for the great feedback.
alimera (Signed) on Oct 11, 2008 09:18 am (Part Four: I)
Holy crap. That was a turn of events I didn't see coming...update again soon girl!
Author's Response: Yeh it was. I had to put a little action in there. More is on the way thanks so much. :)
Author's Response: Yeh it was. I had to put a little action in there. More is on the way thanks so much. :)
DeadandGone (Signed) on Oct 11, 2008 08:19 am (Part Four: I)
This just made me so sad, his whole lifestyle just blew up and I just hope that they can work through this...
Author's Response: I know, I agree, we'll see if he learned his lesson.
Author's Response: I know, I agree, we'll see if he learned his lesson.
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 09, 2008 09:37 pm (Part Four: I)
AWW NAH, HELL NAW!!! WTF? I'm not suprised that he killed Brad. But I'm suprised as hell that he didn't even try to get away. You're breaking my heart here. Next part soon, please.
Author's Response: *Sigh* I thought about making him get away but this way worked out better since it's a short. If it was a longer story, things would have been different. No worries, the last part will be out soon. Thanks for the feedback. :)
Author's Response: *Sigh* I thought about making him get away but this way worked out better since it's a short. If it was a longer story, things would have been different. No worries, the last part will be out soon. Thanks for the feedback. :)
Helena (Anonymous) on Oct 09, 2008 03:31 pm (Part Four: I)
Author's Response: Yeh I know, that was a tuff reality to swallow for the both of them. Things finally turned over. Thanks for the feedback. :)
WTF I totally started tearing up, I feel for Bri for real .
Author's Response: Yeh I know, that was a tuff reality to swallow for the both of them. Things finally turned over. Thanks for the feedback. :)
SJane (Signed) on Oct 09, 2008 03:11 am (Part Four: I)
at first when i read flashback but it was down the road in their relationship i was like wtf how do you get a flashbakc from this but at the end it totaly makes sense lol and you miss..... i don't hate you but your leaving me hanging like my cat on my fly screen of my window when she wants to come inside...*meow* lmao
Author's Response: HAHA yeah I'm glad you guys didnt get too confused with what I was doing. If I was able to post up the last part directly after it would have made more sense that Bri was actually remembering that time. hehe. Oh and an update is coming so no more worries. :) Thanks for the feedback.
Author's Response: HAHA yeah I'm glad you guys didnt get too confused with what I was doing. If I was able to post up the last part directly after it would have made more sense that Bri was actually remembering that time. hehe. Oh and an update is coming so no more worries. :) Thanks for the feedback.
