Shufflee (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 08:53 am (Part Thirteen-ll (THE END))
Sorry i don't review this story as much, but i love it. you're a great writer. and i second the sequal. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your compliment! It's good to know other people enjoy what you write! And as for the sequal, anything is possible so keep checking :)



SJane (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 06:19 am (Part Thirteen-ll (THE END))
Wow reading this from the very first time u posted I did not expect this to end how it did. Im glad that justin was there for her considering jc couldn't find his balls and man up...what a douche.

Are you planning a sequal? So we can see what happens with justin and erin? And if jc has a relationship with journey or not??

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. When I started this story, it had dark tendancies and kind of just flip flopped back and forth. For once I decided to just ignore what I thought I "should" write, and go in a different direction. Iv'e thought about a sequal but nothing is set in stone yet. It is possible, but right now I'd like to work on my other story, as well a start something new, maybe. Keep checking though :) And again, I appreciate your feedback!



themuse (Anonymous) on Mar 25, 2009 02:23 am (Part Thirteen-ll (THE END))

Ummm...yeah, totally wasn't expecting that ending.

I actually had faith JC would show up and I didn't expect Justin to deliever the baby and be with Erin at the hospital like that. The ending was bittersweet for me, but you know where my bias lies, so don't think you didn't write well or anything.

You created a piece of fiction that was different and special and you should be proud of it.

Now let's get musing for the newness. ;)



Author's Response: Newness, indeed! We need another musing breakfast at the hotel! HAHA



themuse (Anonymous) on Mar 14, 2009 12:55 am (Part Twelve-Misery )

Emo JC is interesting.....lol

I wasbn't expecting this, but we shall see where it goes!




GB BATES (Anonymous) on Feb 14, 2009 07:21 pm (Part Eleven- Drifter)
JUSTIN REALLY IS AN A-HOLE ALL JUSTIN THINKS ABOUT IS HIMSELF LOVE THE UPDATE PLEASE UPDATE SOON28670



themuse (Anonymous) on Feb 03, 2009 01:47 am (Part Ten-Whatever it takes)

YAY it's a JC baybay!

It's nice to see with the bad does come some good and I'm glad you want the same thing for your characters as I do.

You did another fantastic chapter and I enjoyed your interpretation of the situation.




Jorie611 (Signed) on Jan 28, 2009 11:01 pm (Part Nine- By a Thread)

I'm glad you wrote this part the way you did. It came out nice and I'm glad that we can sense the love that still lingers between JC and Erin. Now for the baby thing..it would be nice if it were JC's just because they'd have a reason to work things out. Ready for more when you're ready to give it. :)




gb bates (Anonymous) on Jan 28, 2009 02:41 pm (Part Nine- By a Thread)
GREAT CHAPTER WELL WORTH THE WAIT I AM PROABLY CORECT IN THINKING THE BABY IS JUSTINS AND NOT JC  MAN THIS STORY IS BETTER THAN ANYTHING ON TV



Shufflee (Signed) on Jan 28, 2009 10:21 am (Part Nine- By a Thread)
this just adds more to the drama.



SJane (Signed) on Jan 28, 2009 06:54 am (Part Nine- By a Thread)
Oh shit whose could it be??? This just adds to all the juicy drama lol love it



SJane (Signed) on Jan 07, 2009 08:44 am (Part eight- Force of gravity)
Ok so I just caught myself up with this and its gut wrenching, sexy just one hot mess lol
I love it so far and can't wait to see where u take it

Author's Response: It is indeed a gut wreching, hot mess.. lol  Poor JC! I kinda found it fun to write though. It's a good change to see not everything is all happy times and sunshine. Thanks for reading and stay tuned for more!



kacavendam (Anonymous) on Jan 07, 2009 05:54 am (Part eight- Force of gravity)
I loved this story and I am so sad to see it come to and. I hope your next story will be just j.c.

Author's Response: Thanks! It's not over yet! I've got a few more ideas up my sleeve! And I have another work in progress thats strickly JC if you want to check it out :)



themuse (Anonymous) on Jan 06, 2009 11:14 pm (Part eight- Force of gravity)

I really enjoyed seeing JC's POV. It's sad they were both crying and all. Too bad they can't turn back time. :(

Looking forward to see what is next for their relationship.




Anonymous (Anonymous) on Dec 03, 2008 01:29 am (Part seven-Crash and Burn)

Dun..dun..dun...It's nice to JC back in the picture and it's also sad that he didn't tell Erin earlier about wanting to fix things before she slept with Justin. I can only imagine his reaction when we receive it. As always...lovely update and good writing!

P.S. Glad I could title this part. ;)




themister10 (Anonymous) on Dec 03, 2008 01:21 am (Part seven-Crash and Burn)
OMGGGGGGGGGGG what a good chapter....leave us all hanging on until the end! keep em' coming!





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