Bittersweet Revelation by Mel514

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1. Part 1. Intro by Mel514 [Comments - 3] (647 words)

This idea came to me in the form of a short story but branched out into a little more. Be sure to let me know if you like it and i'll continue into shorty series. It's a change of events from my normal writing and I'm looking forward to it. Enjoy!

 

*NOTE: I don't own any of these Characters. None of this is true, yaddy yaddy. It's all pure fiction and I don't claim to know anyone I write about. This story was written only for atistic purposes!

2. Part two-The fine line you cross by Mel514 [Comments - 2] (2086 words)
Let me know if you're reading and liking!

3. Part three-The damage is done by Mel514 [Comments - 2] (1906 words)
Let me know if your reading! I'm working on different ideas for this so stay tuned :)

4. Part four-Deceit is a Bitter Pill to Swallow by Mel514 [Comments - 3] (1502 words)

Enjoy!

 

5. Part five- Something's Missing by Mel514 [Comments - 1] (1227 words)
Another chapter for you all! Be sure to review!

6. Part Six- Quiet Confessions by Mel514 [Comments - 1] (2426 words)
Heres another chapter for you with little wait. This is all panning out nicely in my mind. I hope you're all enjoying!

7. Part seven-Crash and Burn by Mel514 [Comments - 2] (3362 words)

Transition chapters take forever but I hope I did this one justice. Please be sure to review :)

 

 

 

8. Part eight- Force of gravity by Mel514 [Comments - 3] (2747 words)
It's been a while but I'm starting back at this story. Hopefully coming to an end sometime soon. I hope someones still reading out there. I had the idea of just ending it right now but I've got too many ideas running through my head. Anways, here's part 8. Be sure to review :)

9. Part Nine- By a Thread by Mel514 [Comments - 4] (3340 words)

Here is part nine for every one that's still reading. I haven't finalized the ending just yet but I'm getting there. A part of me doesn't want to end this story just yet because it's different and I find it fun to write. Anyways, as always, enjoy and review :)

 

 

10. Part Ten-Whatever it takes by Mel514 [Comments - 1] (3053 words)

Okay, so I've realized this story has gotten a hold of me and thanks to the plotless mind of myself, my summary has become so far off from whats really happening, and I feel it's no longer in following with what I'm writing. In regards to this, I may be changing it soon or once I finish, but everything else will remain the same. 

Back to the update-It seems everytime I try to get closer to the end, I push myself back a little. I guess I really enjoy writing from the minds of these characters I've created. It's just a good change in fiction-land. Anyways, be sure to review!

Mel-

11. Part Eleven- Drifter by Mel514 [Comments - 1] (1690 words)
Ok, so this story is making me want to rip my hair out, trying to think of differnet ways to go but I think, no I HOPE that I've got it worked out. I can't wait for it to be done! In fact, when I finish posting this chapter, I'm going to work on the others and try to wrap this up. You know the drill.. if you're reading, please take a second to leave a review. It goes a long way when you've worked hard on something :)

12. Part Twelve-Misery by Mel514 [Comments - 1] (1595 words)

I promise I haven't forgot about this story! I am so determined to finish it, even if it isn't my best work but because I know I can. You can thank this chapter on a long day at work, little sleep and how my mind works when it lacks said sleep. I'm hoping to finish soon. I promise. Please drop me a review if you're reading :-]

 

 

13. Part Thirteen-l by Mel514 [Comments - 0] (3908 words)
This really feels like the longest chapter I've ever written but it's not. But we're coming to an end. I hope to wrap this story up in one more part but don't quote me on that. My fictional side has a mind of it's own but i'm eager to FINISH! Please drop me a review if you're reading. It goes a long way for a writer :)

14. Part Thirteen-ll (THE END) by Mel514 [Comments - 3] (5842 words)

I am pleased to say this story is FINALLY complete. I was determined to finish it and am glad I did so. It started out one way, went the other but was a writing adventure in itself. Everyone looks for a small procrastination from other stories we're working on but am glad to say that this one gave me some time to write a little darker, and try out some new ways of writing.

 In conclusion to that, I hope you enjoy the ending! As always, feedback is appreciated!