Shufflee (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 08:53 am (Part Thirteen-ll (THE END))
Sorry i don't review this story as much, but i love it. you're a great writer. and i second the sequal. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your compliment! It's good to know other people enjoy what you write! And as for the sequal, anything is possible so keep checking :)



SJane (Signed) on Mar 25, 2009 06:19 am (Part Thirteen-ll (THE END))
Wow reading this from the very first time u posted I did not expect this to end how it did. Im glad that justin was there for her considering jc couldn't find his balls and man up...what a douche.

Are you planning a sequal? So we can see what happens with justin and erin? And if jc has a relationship with journey or not??

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing. When I started this story, it had dark tendancies and kind of just flip flopped back and forth. For once I decided to just ignore what I thought I "should" write, and go in a different direction. Iv'e thought about a sequal but nothing is set in stone yet. It is possible, but right now I'd like to work on my other story, as well a start something new, maybe. Keep checking though :) And again, I appreciate your feedback!



themuse (Anonymous) on Mar 25, 2009 02:23 am (Part Thirteen-ll (THE END))

Ummm...yeah, totally wasn't expecting that ending.

I actually had faith JC would show up and I didn't expect Justin to deliever the baby and be with Erin at the hospital like that. The ending was bittersweet for me, but you know where my bias lies, so don't think you didn't write well or anything.

You created a piece of fiction that was different and special and you should be proud of it.

Now let's get musing for the newness. ;)



Author's Response: Newness, indeed! We need another musing breakfast at the hotel! HAHA





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