boooo I wanted to be your 100th review! *pouts*
fiiiine... 101 will have to do. reminds me of the cute little dalmatian movie haha!
ok anyway, back to JC and Serena OMGOMGOMG!
I'm bathing in the overflowing cuteness seriously. the deli thing was just adorable. he had a "usual" and his fav table and then the sexy look with the green flecks which I'm gonna have to search for in EVERY picture now thankyouverymuch.
and then ooooooo the boat! sunset? SUNSET! come on! *dies* I would so rape him on a boat. yes rape... I said it! he's asking for it when he's all sexy and flirty like that *melts*.
and then Thanksgiving! Roy, Karen... DUDE HEATHER?! I totally forgot she existed there for a minute. and I would've been scared for Serena too. we know nothing about this chick, no clue what to expect! but omg she was so niiiice! awww! and ooo snap... the wine! and her going on about fake friends and high school. dude that sucks.
but the whole family were all so nice and JC-ish! *happy dance* I loved it! and ok... i may have gotten a little misty-eyed with the the whole anniversary/lilies scene. that was the freaking icing on the cake of awesome.
and then OH HELL part 2! the email! LMAO! that would be so me... actually that would be any girl, lets be honest. walk away, distract yourself, no no no no! dont look! okay fine... just a peak, yeah just that sentence. lol! then she LEAVES HER WINE GLASS AND THE DOOR OPEN!
I love her.
and okay fine she might not be curious but I AM ... who was he writing too damn it! lol!
the family time was... again... CUTENESS! Karen talking to her on the patio and then the parents sharing the adoption story! gawd that was just perfect!
I'm gonna reread this chapter like crazy until you update btw... favorite.story.ever!!!
Author's Response:
Well Gosh, Vikki. did you like it? I can't tell! HA!
Yeah, I liked this chapter and REALLY stressed about his family, especially his sister because we know so little about her. For some, that might make it easier to go all carte blanche, but I worry so much and try so hard to stay realistic.
I don't know who he was emailing! LOL. It's not a focal point of the story!
Yeah I would be curious, too, but.... I think she's running from something, because what girl wouldn't just DIE to be Mrs, you know? For some reason this character isn't letting me write her all excited and looking forward to being married. Have yet to figure out why. I guess there's more story left!!
Thanks babe, your reviews make writing such a joy!
