Comments For All I Wanna Do...
JoshDonnaFan (Signed) on Oct 05, 2009 04:54 pm (Chapter 35: Road Trippin' it: Balls & a Big Stick)
I just found your story this past weekend and spend the weekend wrapped up in it. LOVED IT! Definitely wishing there was more. Right now I'm going to check out your other stuff. I really enjoyed the first person POV in this one, and that's different for me. Usually first person POV puts me off, but wonderful job!

Author's Response: Ooooh, a new reader! Exciting!!! Thanks so much for reading and commenting. I totally agree with you on the first person POV, but I felt like the story needed to come from a unique perspective and not one where we know his thoughts and motives. This way we experience the story through her eyes. I'm so happy you enjoyed it so far!



grishy (Signed) on Oct 05, 2009 08:30 am (Chapter 35: Road Trippin' it: Balls & a Big Stick)

How many ways I love this chapter...

1.- The call about "green" job

2.- The way JC wakes up

3.- Sexy pool game

4.-JC being teased about his stylish taste

5.- Hand in back pocket

6.- The whole restaurant interaction

7.-New York

....8.- Post exorcism JC



Author's Response: LOVE IT! what a thorough list! HAHAHA! So glad you enjoyed it. I was a little worried after the last chapter that I had run out of story but.... to quote myself, 'the bitch is back!' Thanks! Off to write some more.



Vikki (Signed) on Oct 04, 2009 10:15 pm (Chapter 35: Road Trippin' it: Balls & a Big Stick)

Thank you! This was a very fun chapter... nice after breaking my heart and sobbing uncontrollably in the last one lol!

duuuuude the whole morning sex *guh* I hate her sometimes. Your fictional character is so damn lucky! lol!

the seedy dive joint was adorable! I wanna drink tap beer and play pool with JC! OMG THANK YOU FOR TWEEZING HIS EYEBROWS!

hhhmmm what else....

UGH the whole ass squeezing in the street... yes that would totally be me. and i love how they remembered their first date... awww!

Can't wait for NY :)



Author's Response: I will never forget being called a fucker. Love it!! ha! I totally never pay atteniton to his brows... i just needed a reason to use that line... but I'm so happy it worked! Yep she's pretty damn lucky... hope she realizes it!



ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Oct 04, 2009 06:53 pm (Chapter 35: Road Trippin' it: Balls & a Big Stick)

Can I please please please go to NYC with JC instead of Serena. It would probably but a damper on what ever you have planned next, but eh oh well it would make me so very happy... oh wait fictional JC is going to NYC so not sure how that would work anyways.

I am very happy that Serena got the job. I know how it feels to be waiting to hear about job stuff. 

Can't wait to hear about their NYC stop next! 



Author's Response: yeah you know if it was up to me, i'd do it but... Serena doesn't share well and uh.... she said she'd beat my ass. You know she'd do it. So. Sorry! :D  New York will be fun. They're hilarious in my mind...



SJane (Signed) on Oct 04, 2009 06:43 pm (Chapter 35: Road Trippin' it: Balls & a Big Stick)
New york new yooooork haha

Author's Response: Ha! exactly. Let's see what kind of trouble they can get into.





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