Comments For All I Wanna Do...
Pumples (Signed) on Jul 16, 2014 10:18 am (Chapter 36 | In Old New York (Pt1))
Favourite chapter so far :)
grishy (Signed) on Oct 20, 2009 10:24 pm (Chapter 36 | In Old New York (Pt1))
Author's Response:
I'm with Serena, grumpy, bossy, bitchy JC is sexy...hehehehe
I think this chapter is written very well; a hokking start, a good pace, a peak (the accident), and a calm end. Goog job!
Author's Response:
Thanks !!! I was happy with how it came out..
Vikki (Signed) on Oct 20, 2009 09:54 pm (Chapter 36 | In Old New York (Pt1))
Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you had a reaction to the accident! Not to be mean, of course... I just spent a lot of time revising it so it sounded just right... scary and grippiing but JC is there to save the day and offer comfort, like always.
aaaaaawwwwwwwwww! they napped!
god i love this story. you gave me a freakin heart attack with that highway accident though... geezus!
Author's Response: Good, I'm glad you had a reaction to the accident! Not to be mean, of course... I just spent a lot of time revising it so it sounded just right... scary and grippiing but JC is there to save the day and offer comfort, like always.
