Comments For All I Wanna Do...
Pumples (Signed) on Aug 09, 2014 03:55 pm (Chapter 54 - Trouble in Paradise)
Wow! Just... Wow.



roseinvisible (Signed) on Nov 10, 2010 05:36 pm (Chapter 54 - Trouble in Paradise)
Oh hell.



ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Nov 07, 2010 07:27 pm (Chapter 54 - Trouble in Paradise)

Okay I just went back and reread the end of this chapter. What the hell cracked in JC? I realize that he is upset about her moving out. And I can totally agree with him on that. I was completely thrown by it and astonished and I'm not the one dating her. But his response seemed very out of character for him. He really went for the jugular with some comments. ""You were totally right, weren't you?  When we met, you said you were fucked up. And you are."" He might as well have stabbed her. Probably would have hurt less.

And can I just say that I am almost more upset about Serena's anger over him going out on the road again than her decision to move out. I mean really? She pushed him to go back out there and do the music thing. She was really the driving force behind him doing this tour in the first place. But now she is going to complain that he is going to tour again? I get that she missed him, but come on. Serena is smart, she should have been able to realize that pushing him to do music meant that he would be touring, a lot... and then some.  

So I guess this comment means I have to retract my previous comment of "That's all I have to say." 



Author's Response:

Ha! Yes i guess you had more to say!

I feel like his reaction has been building for awhile. He's been very patient and accommodating to her and her neurotic behavior, but a man can only take so much. "JC" has had enough, reached the end of his rope. And it had to be enough for Serena to finally get that she's fucking things up all on her own. It isn't so much that she's moving out... it's that her instinct is to run. She thinks this is how to solve the problem,  not stay and fight it out. Fight for them. But that'll come out later.. you know... when they make up. *hee* 




ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Nov 07, 2010 06:57 pm (Chapter 54 - Trouble in Paradise)

Not happy. That's all I have to say. Not happy.

But on a side note... I love the name you give to your minor characters that happen to be pretty girls in boots with sexy voices.  



Author's Response: Ha! I didn't even think of that. Hang in there... I gotta make her suffer a little for being such a dumbass. 



Megan (Anonymous) on Nov 06, 2010 10:14 pm (Chapter 54 - Trouble in Paradise)
OMG that fight just makes me want to cry...these 2 are meant for each other! Serena needs to pull her head out of her ass and wake up and realize that JC just gave her an ultimatum. PLEASE PLEASE update soon! I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Already writing the next chapter. Working on it this week, PROMISE. 



jersey_tenn (Signed) on Nov 06, 2010 10:12 pm (Chapter 54 - Trouble in Paradise)
I am so not mad at JC! Serena on the other hand -- what an idiot! Ah! Really? I'm so damn confused...I think she just ruined my Saturday night. I'm going to bed. Ah!

Author's Response:

I know, right? She's a twit. I gotta make her suffer a smidge. Hang in there! 

 




l-dawg (Anonymous) on Nov 06, 2010 07:45 pm (Chapter 54 - Trouble in Paradise)
Oh my gosh! That was brutal! I flinched a couple of times through that fight. I'm glad you got back to the story, I was worried for a while there. Can't wait to see what happens next...

Author's Response:

I had a feeling a few people would not like this chapter... but I don't write fairy tales, man! Lol. Hang in there... I won't make it hurt too long. Already writing the next chapter. 

 




grishy (Signed) on Nov 06, 2010 07:23 pm (Chapter 54 - Trouble in Paradise)
It feels like I was on the fight actually, so real and hurtfull. Don't make us wait too much please....

Author's Response: Already writing the update! Hang in there! 





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