Okay I just went back and reread the end of this chapter. What the hell cracked in JC? I realize that he is upset about her moving out. And I can totally agree with him on that. I was completely thrown by it and astonished and I'm not the one dating her. But his response seemed very out of character for him. He really went for the jugular with some comments. ""You were totally right, weren't you? When we met, you said you were fucked up. And you are."" He might as well have stabbed her. Probably would have hurt less.
And can I just say that I am almost more upset about Serena's anger over him going out on the road again than her decision to move out. I mean really? She pushed him to go back out there and do the music thing. She was really the driving force behind him doing this tour in the first place. But now she is going to complain that he is going to tour again? I get that she missed him, but come on. Serena is smart, she should have been able to realize that pushing him to do music meant that he would be touring, a lot... and then some.
So I guess this comment means I have to retract my previous comment of "That's all I have to say."
Author's Response:
Ha! Yes i guess you had more to say!
I feel like his reaction has been building for awhile. He's been very patient and accommodating to her and her neurotic behavior, but a man can only take so much. "JC" has had enough, reached the end of his rope. And it had to be enough for Serena to finally get that she's fucking things up all on her own. It isn't so much that she's moving out... it's that her instinct is to run. She thinks this is how to solve the problem, not stay and fight it out. Fight for them. But that'll come out later.. you know... when they make up. *hee*
Not happy. That's all I have to say. Not happy.
But on a side note... I love the name you give to your minor characters that happen to be pretty girls in boots with sexy voices.
Author's Response: Ha! I didn't even think of that. Hang in there... I gotta make her suffer a little for being such a dumbass.
Author's Response: Already writing the next chapter. Working on it this week, PROMISE.
Author's Response:
I know, right? She's a twit. I gotta make her suffer a smidge. Hang in there!
Author's Response:
I had a feeling a few people would not like this chapter... but I don't write fairy tales, man! Lol. Hang in there... I won't make it hurt too long. Already writing the next chapter.
Author's Response: Already writing the update! Hang in there!