ok... give me a moment to reflect here. good gracious.
that was so good! from the moment she was talking to that girl on the plane, who's ex lived in Atlanta and how it went to shit.... you had me scared. I was like "noooo! I want this trip to be happy!" lol!
so thank you thank you thank you! I loved how she was all nervous to meet Tyler (wouldnt we all!) and how cute their lunch was. I love the whole dishwasher thing and ... hey! whats up with that! I was waiting for the unloading-the-dishwasher scene with JC... lol! its ok though... I'll live.
ANDOMGFUCKINGGOD! i'm so jealous she gets to have delicious sex with that man. so so so jealous.
but the best part of this update, and i guess her trip out there, was really how close they're becoming. he's really putting effort into opening up and letting her in, showing her "Josh" or "C" or whatever... lol! i like how she calls him Chasez... its cute! :) ... but i loved when he showed her the album, i dunno... that felt big to me. their talking was great too but pictures... they like, make things real you know?
i love his bossyness! was he extra bossy or was I just really picking up on it? but damn its sexy! and i laughed when he was messing with her at the diner, lol! he's so bad! but i liked how you broke down schizo and kate. man i hope things work out for im in ny... but i'm not getting my hopes up. *sigh*
and i dont know how she was able to control herself at the studio.... seeing JC work has to be like an aphrodisiac or something! lol! It would've taken A LOT for me to just sit and behave.
ok I think I'm done... sorry about the novel but hey, its all your fault anyway. :)
Author's Response:
Girl, don't ever hold back! I appreciate hearing your thoughts, because I'm not the one reading it for the first time.
Yes he was extra bossy:-), but I kind of remembered a lot of interviews where he 'took charge' and they kind of looked to him for the 'go'. Plus he always said 'I'm not bossy. I just like order', which tells me people think he's bossy but he doesn't think he is. I just think it's cute how she keeps telling him he's bossy and it just rolls off his back-- he's likely used to it. In my head.
Allison was a little bit of foreshadowiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnggggggggg but it doesn't have anything to do with JC and Serena, not really. She'll be back, later. *eep*
Yes, I thought the photo album would be a BIG way to let her in a little bit and show her some things without her having to ask. I couldn't think of a funny way to work the dishwasher unloading and make it funny and quirky so I just decided to allude to it and let it go. We get it, JC is obsessed with order. I dont want it to turn into a comedy, just cute little quirks that make him endearing.
Glad you like the updates. More to come! She's got a lot to work through and there's a lot of stuff coming up. Exciting! I wish it could write itself. ': |
Loved every single one of them. Im glad he's opening up to her as well and not just her being the open 1
Author's Response: It was just 2 chapters but I had to cut them because tehy were too long, lol. Thanks for the review! Yeah I think him showing her what he wants her to know is a great step forward. more to come!
I just want to say that I absolutely love this story. Love, love, love, love. :-D
For as long as I can remember, I was stricty a JC girl, but around '04 I started privately cheating on him with Justin lol (publicly in '06) and I've always felt horribly about that.
This story right here is reconverting me, I think. I ADORE it completely (more than a lot of Justin fanfics I'm currently reading). Please continue the amazing job you're doing. This is an awesome story.
~N~
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! That's so nice to hear! Variety is the spice of life-- it's okay to dabble! ;-) Thanks for your great review, it's very inspiring. More to come!
