I started reading this story today, per recommendation of a friend. I'm not a big fiction reader but she convinced me to give it a go and I have to tell you : I am positively hooked!
Your portrayal of JC is just so spot on to the JC I "see" in my mind. The way you write is absolutely engrossing. The story just draws you in from the very first chapter and never gets boring. And well, let's not forget, the sex is HOT!
You're very talented and I'm thankful you're sharing this talent with us. I very much look forward to the next chapter! Thank you!
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I really appreciate hearing that!! Love hearing it, actually and I'm glad you enjoyed it! And well yeah... how can sex with w JC not be hot? Seriously. Duh. LOL! The next chapter is on the way, hopefully in a few days. This has been my baby, and a fun story to write. Sometimes it misbehaves, but it always comes back.... eventually. Thanks for a great review!
Ok I loved the whole "I can talk about two things at once" conversation. Deer...rabbit. Hillarious. It's nice to see humor in the relationship and not all drama. It's more realistic. Good job can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter.
Author's Response: LMAO, sometimes in my mind, JC is a sarcastic, hilarious fool. I like to bring that out every once in while. I'm glad it worked. Thanks!:-D
GUH! Can I have JC? Pleeeease!
before I start gushing about my undying love for this man, let me go back to Allison and Tyler! ALLISON AND TYLER! Ok that lunch and day after was toooo cute for this not to work out! So yes I'm on the cheering squad for those two! yay! :)
and I have no clue why, maybe too much coffee? but I found the whole "key to the P.O box" thing WAY hilarious! lol!
srsly...
"Not like you do. They don't turn out as good as yours. Think of it as a perfect expression of your love for me."
LOL! I love him... I love him! I love him!
and OMGZ... him kissing her and then asking her if she wants him to go to Denver with her! my bf does the same shit when he doesnt want me to say no to something! ugh it drives me crazy because it really does work! and shit... if its coming from JC? *dies*
"So am I. But we have go look at stuff." He wagged his head and that cute way I loved and mumbled as he checked his pocket for his wallet and his phone. "You have a keycard, right? I already lost mine, I think."
its SO cute! i love it too! and omg he would so lose his keycard... *swoon* I love this story!
and I need to just say... I LOVE that he went to Denver with her! that car ride was just... GUH! srsly my love for this story is borderline unhealthy.
but awwwww the whole daddy talk make me sad! i wanted to give him a hug so badly! but its so great that they have each other you know? cause she knows exactly how he feels and where he's coming from because they share that and she makes him feel better and just... its awesome.
and then! OMGZ! He said it! HE SAID IT! And it was ... perfect! I'm so happy I'm alone right now cause I literally raised my arms and said "YES!" like the nerd that I am! lol!
I love seeing them away from LA and being normal... but damn, I'm scared if/when TMZ & Co. does come around! I love the cutesy, flirty, fun... and I'm so scared that'll go right out the door when his celebrity comes around. :(
Author's Response: First, LOVE seeing your perspective. Keep it coming. The whole Tyler and Allison thing has been rolling around in my head for awhile. That relationship serves a purpose-- It'll come into play later. *sneakysneak grin* I thought it turned out REALLY cute how they were just drawn together. I also thought the car ride was cute. I love how things just happen and then I read back and go 'oh, so we're going there? Okay!' I hadn't planned for him to say it until futher along but it just seemed like a really good moment, so I used it. I think it worked and I like that t wasn't mushy and swoony, just matter of fact. Some research for the next chapter and some things are coming up that I am kind of excited about. *eep*
Very beatifful chapter. Please update quick
Author's Response: Thank you! Working on it, I need to do some research for the next chapter. Have to do it right!
Author's Response: Yay!
He said it!!! I am soooo glad that he said it! God and I thought I was alreayd head over heels in love with this JC, but I fell even harder after reading that. Too cute.
But now the meeting of the birth father is coming up. That makes me nervous. Or I guess anxious is a better term.
Author's Response: Thanks, I so appreciate your comments! I'm kind of nervous, too, Now that I think about it, lol.
