Comments For All I Wanna Do...
SJane (Signed) on May 04, 2009 03:26 am (Chapter 22)
Im with her im totally voting for LA

Author's Response: Me too! :-D Sorry it took me so long to respond, I just noticed this was here! I have a new chapter posted.............getting.......closer!!!



Vikki (Signed) on May 03, 2009 10:10 pm (Chapter 22)

Srsly! The awesomeness of this story is just... OMG! I can't even think clearly right now, my brain is just screaming "more more! i want more!" which then leaves me rereading the chapter just to shut it up! lol!

ok so let me just gush over some fav lines first...

Her voice was gritty, gravelly, something I imagined JC found sexy. I had my eye on her.

It wasn't that I was jealous, and I trusted him-I just didn't trust anyone else.

LMAO! OMG I love her!


OK JC ... OMGZ! I love him, its just freakin adorable how he's planned this and that because he loves her and wants to make memories *dies* and its just GUH I LOVE HIM!

I would have totally been Serena at that pottery store though LOL! But make a Swayze-Ghost moment there and been like "So why dont you come sit behind me to help and sing Unchained Melody in my ear" LOL!


The dance studio. Tina. Serena is so cute! Really! JC totally nailed that on the head... lol! But JC's old whoring ways are no secret ok? I'd be giving every damn chick that looks at him the stink eye... "bish this is MY man!"

And the club? Srsly JC, COME ON! Points for Lance but he should know her better... but hey, I got to read this out of it and srsly fav line EVER!

"Well, yeah. But besides that. I'll remember all those times we sat on the couch and watched fucking Top Chef Marathons, and Intervention and Star Wars and all your science shows. I'll remember laying in bed with you at 3 am while you ramble on and on about something or another, while I'm trying to fall asleep. I'll remember Sunday morning pancakes and arguing over the remote and... yes, all the sex."


and the end! omg you srsly gave me watery yes with JC and his whole I love you more than anything ... OMGZ!*swoon*


I hope shes take that damn business card out and calls! CALL DAMN IT! Move to LA and let JC love her forever and ever and ever and ever!



Author's Response: HAHAHA!  Thanks for your awesome review. I had a feeling you would like Tina. :-D Uhm yeah no on the Unchained Melody, mama. LMAO. BUt thanks for the faves, I always wonder what people like. \o/





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