Author's Response: Alright, Alright, I'll leave iiiiiiitttt! Lol.
First part of chapter: Holy Shit!
Second part of the chapter: Awww!
Author's Response: I know, I'm thinking of taking it down. It's a little much. But it was fun writing it!
fuck! *runs off to find tissues*
I keep saying it, I know, but DAMN IT! I fucking love this story so much. Him and those lyrics and holding her and talking about kids and a family and OMG that letter he wrote her and sending it so its the last piece of mail! STOP OK JUST STOP IT! *sobs*
I cant be single while reading this. I just cant. Its killing me! lol! I need a man, fuck... lets be honest, I need THIS JC! Make him come to life for me... lmao!
I'm not gonna even mention the first half of this chapter cause girl you knooow what you were doing when you wrote that like that and.... well... yes. Lets leave it at that. *melts*
loved the drive down to florida... a little sneak preview before the main show! yay! the road trip back to LA is gonna be awesome!!
seriously dying to see how you write up his parents. ah which reminds me of the last chapter and the whole patio scene with serena's parents. OMG loved it. they were just so spot on with what they were telling her. i just kept nodding my head going "yup thats right" lol!
and awww MELISSA! i totally shed a tear there... so sad. I love my friends and will die if they left me and flew across the country. I'm too selfish... ha!
Author's Response:
Lol, your reviews are always hilariously fun. Yes, I knew what I was doing. I was long overdue for some good old fashioned smut. LMAO. Ehhhhhhhhh. it is what it is and you KNOW it would be on if you did not see Fictional JC for 2 months. Dude, not sure I'd make it home...
Melissa breaks my heart, I cried writing it, then reading it.
Seriously on a roll with this story! Can't wait to write his parents either, and then get on the road!
Author's Response: :rock: She's gotta meet the folks and then they're hittin' the road!
