katethegreat (Signed) on Apr 16, 2009 12:05 am (Unbearable : Chapter Two)

alright, first off... stomach flu my ass!

if you're cooking up what i think you're cooking up... i can't wait for it, even though it's gonna be sooooo damn sad.

anywho... another excellent chapter my dear.

i love the fact that she's kind of picking up the pieces and trying to move forward, cause lord knows that takes a lot of strength.

and seriously, how awesome is trace? i pretty much adore him in this.



Author's Response: I have no clue what you're talking about! LOL. rnrnYes, picking up the pieces is never easy, but must be done. I tried to make that come across as real as I possibly could. I pulled from my own expierence and others around me that have gone through something similar. I just thought it was time to pull her out of that depressed state and have something good happen to her for a change...whatever that may entail.rnrnTrace! He's pretty awesome! I have to agree! I'm glad you're liking his character! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing this. It means a lot to me!!



Teeny (Signed) on Apr 14, 2009 11:05 am (Unbearable : Chapter Two)
I love it, so I'm tellin' ya!  I admit when I read the first chapter I had my fingers crossed for a miraculous recovery (I get too emotionally involved with characters, I just can't help myself...) but I'm so glad Beth seems to be pulling herself out of the depression and I can't wait to see how she pieces her life together again.  So basically you have to update immediately =)

Author's Response: Thank you sooo much!! I have to admit myself...I went back and forth on making Justin pull through. But I decided to go this route, because the other way was just so cliche, I guess is the word I'm looking for. I chose to go this route because I really like where I'm going with this in my head. I am so glad that you're liking it!





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