ok, thoughts and comments...
first off, I am in love with this story (not really a big surprise since I like pretty much any and everything you write) and I think your writing is amazing!
#2: this part here, made me laugh out loud..."Oh, let's start talking about our past, Mr. Sugar Rush. I do recall being smacked in the face, jumped on and given shaving creme on my face with what little sleep I got with you four hellions around."
"I know nothing you are speaking of."
#3. don't tease me, it's just mean: He had to call them.
He wanted the group back.
JC, included.
#4. I wanted to cry at the end and be a part of that family/group hug. He really is going to be okay, right? Right? I don't know if I could handle JC dying...
Author's Response: I love reviews like this. It's when the reader gets into detail that you know you hit a nerve or a smile or something. For that, thanks! :) And obviously thanks for reading and loving, haha :)
Author's Response: Thaaaaaank you Marija!!! :) :)
"No," he chuckled. "Your words. I always loved your verse better than mine.
Me too
He's a good guy, everyone wants him to succeed, everyone wants him happy.
Me too
"Without you in my life, Jaaay-Teee, I just wouldn't be living at all ..."
I always thought (in my JuiCy mind) that their sing it like that to each other.
Author's Response: lol, I loved both versions. The first verse struck a chord in my heart, though; but, you know me, I prefer hearing JC singing so that second verse is probably embedded in my mind forever, hahaha. And I actually thought of the JuC thing when I wrote that, haha
