Comments For The Perfect Night
jrtimberyes (Signed) on Feb 07, 2011 11:37 pm (Chapter 1)
aww this one wins awards in my book. i loved it!



Timberlake (Signed) on Jan 11, 2010 11:23 pm (Chapter 1)
this was my challenge and i just noticed this was posted, LOL. i loved your take on it. it's fine that you didn't use the words, the concept was there. the whole club scene was hilarious. i even laughed when he said Victor, LOL i can only hope my future hubby and i will be doing the same :D lol

Author's Response: Well I just noticed the review so I guess we're even haha. Sorry it look me forever to respond! I'm glad you liked it :-)



Vikki (Signed) on Nov 12, 2009 08:06 pm (Chapter 1)

mmmmmm this was HOT and all kinds of adorable lol! but reeeeally HOT too! 

you should totally add it to the Role Play challenge, I think it'll fit just fine. :)



Author's Response: haha well thanks dear. I did add it, I think I did it right... oh well. Thanks for the review! <3



MochaB (Signed) on Nov 10, 2009 01:45 pm (Chapter 1)
Awwww! The ending was completely adorable and so funny! Actually, the whole story was funny. "Yes Jade, I'm victor." Haha. And school of fish? Cute! This was sexy too. Haha. Lovely job ma'am. :o)

Author's Response: Well thank ya ma'am. :) Glad you liked it, Jade and Victor are working it out haha thanks for the review!



mzmillion (Signed) on Nov 09, 2009 11:30 pm (Chapter 1)
omg that was soooo cute....and thats a load of kids... But with Justin, who wouldn't be up for that many.

Author's Response: thanks :) Yes, loads of kids but very true, with justin how could you not? lol thanks for the review!



MissTasha (Signed) on Nov 09, 2009 11:09 pm (Chapter 1)
Great concept! Loved it.

Author's Response: Thanksa lot!



d_simplicity (Signed) on Nov 09, 2009 07:38 pm (Chapter 1)
Awww, that was sweet. I enjoyed it. :)

Author's Response: thank ya thank ya haha :)



meggie (Signed) on Nov 09, 2009 07:02 pm (Chapter 1)
so cute!! the thundstorm made me think of 'sound of music' where they all run to maria's room!!! i feel like i'm 6 years old all over again.........well not really that young cause the sex would just be wrong but you know what i'm say! hahahaha

Author's Response: Would you believe I never saw the Sound of Music? I know, it's terrible! I really should watch that at some point, but isn't it like 5 hours? I'm scared haha. Thanks for reading! :)





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