Comments For September
AmberW (Signed) on Jun 17, 2010 06:51 pm (Open Up Your Eyes)
Awwww....I'll admit it-I cried a little.  So great!

Author's Response:

I cried the entire time I wrote the story. I seem to have turned into some kind of sap when I write lately. I'm a total loser!

 It was great to write something out of the norm for me.

Thanks :)




jersey_tenn (Signed) on Jun 17, 2010 01:10 pm (Open Up Your Eyes)
oh man...i was expecting her to be pregnant, but man, you still through me for a loop. That little boy - gosh. Ahh! I loved it! Great job hun!

Author's Response:

I tried and tried to write the section without the little boy. I wanted you to see her and how she changed and coped with the loss of Justin but he was a huge part of how she came around. That little boy, was the light of her life. So I got rid of a lot of the things I wrote and kept him in there.  And the idea of him telling her he loves her... it melted my heart. & It could also see it as 'Justin' telling her he loves her again.

Again, Thanks :) I enjoyed writing something different.




jersey_tenn (Signed) on Jun 16, 2010 05:15 pm (The End of the End)
u quote ms. clarkson!!!! i love that song! but, umm...can u stop making me cry? lol

Author's Response:

 I really didn't mean to quote her. That song is incredible though so I guess maybe in the back of my mind it was there wanting me to write those words.I need to go back and credit that.

Trust me, I was in tears the entire time writing this section. Even though I wrote the section and re-read it fifty or so times, I couldn't shake the tears each time I read it. That's when I figured out it was perfect the way it was.

Anyways, Thanks :)




ltaylor03 (Signed) on Jun 16, 2010 01:48 pm (The End of the End)
This was SO sad. Yes. The warning was needed. Maybe we should write the admins and have them add that warning. "Tissue Warning" "Cold Shower Warning" lol.

Author's Response:

Writing this chapter was difficult. I wanted to cry just thinking about what I had to write. I had the tears in my eyes as I typed each word.

I think 'warnings' should be needed for some stories. This chapter needed the Tissue Warning that was for sure.

Thanks ;)




ltaylor03 (Signed) on Jun 16, 2010 01:42 pm (The Beginning of the End)

EEEEEEE!

Great beginning my love!!!



Author's Response:

yay! I couldn't stop thinking about what to do with this story since you mentioned you wanted more. But then I started writing and it all just came out. :)

Thanks :)




AmberW (Signed) on Jun 16, 2010 02:51 am (The End of the End)

The part of her in the hospital and crying over his body-intense.

Keep it up girl.



Author's Response:

That particular part took me the longest to write. I think because didn't want to write it, I didnt want her to actually be going through that wave of emotion. However I'm happy with the way it turned out. (Even with the emotional rollarcoaster it took me on.) I think this scene was needed to see what she went through.

Thanks :)




AmberW (Signed) on Jun 15, 2010 12:55 pm (The Beginning of the End)
I'm really looking forward to reading these next two chapters!  I like how the first chapters was just like what happens and now you're giving us the sprinkles of details.  Great job!

Author's Response: This is defiantly different for me. I like to write happy joy joy stories with lots of drama. This was just, different. Lol. Thanks :)



AmberW (Signed) on Jun 15, 2010 12:50 pm (The Lake)
Holy crap girl. That's all I can say.  The end was definitely un expected-but so good!

Author's Response:

I glad it wasn't how you expected it to end! I wanted it to be unexpected.

Thanks :)




ltaylor03 (Signed) on May 12, 2010 03:38 pm (The Lake)

This would be amazing if you took it a few chapters further and explored their relationship mmore and what happened.

Nonetheless, I loved it :) 

You're a great writer, my dear! 



Author's Response:

Who knows with me I could write more of this. It was a spur of the moment thing anyways. I want to go back and change so many things, (I may change little things) and write a couple more chapters!

Thanks :)




MissTasha (Signed) on Mar 27, 2010 09:13 pm (The Lake)
Damn you. My eyes welled up. Sad stuff. :( Good story, lady.

Author's Response:

Sorry for the sadness... this was very different for me.


Thanks ;)






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