Comments For Persuasion
Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 02, 2010 06:25 pm (Chapter 3)
he was sure she thought he was a crazy stalker, now. No one shows up at your new doorstep after so long without speaking except crazy stalkers. that was one of the most hilarious things i've ever read. justin has a real problem with people touching his stuff. i love that you show that throughout the story, making justin flawed in such a normal way. i also love that he's a photographer, such a unique alternative career choice. their whole conversation was hella awkward and two points to justin for the peter burn. gemma was hella pissed her husband might not be around for their wedding - god forbid if DC calls! geez... that's a lot of time apart and no hot, passionate, electric sex to speak of? something tells me justin knows how to light it up...mmm... if only i could speak from first hand exxxperience ;) lol onto the next!

Author's Response:

BAHAHA! I'm so glad Justin's able to make you laugh! He...is paranoid in the worst ways, sometimes. And he does! He's just very protective of things he's proud of, :). Hahaha, yes, Justin was just JOKING but Gemma sort of flipped...and no, defintiely no hot, passionate, electric sex.

LOLOL Oh my god, I'm pretty sure Justin knows how to SET THINGS ON FIRE. 

I'm so glad you're liking it, by the way!




a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 15, 2010 06:31 pm (Chapter 3)
This is getting really good.  I can't wait to see what you do with Justin and Gemma.  Great work!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it, even though it's taking FOREVER for me to get chapters out! Thanks for sticking with it! :)



justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2010 11:11 pm (Chapter 3)
oh i love them already-- it's cool to see the glimpses of each of their personalities through the other person. can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Aww! I'm so glad you love them! They are very very cute, I'm sure you'll see soon :D!



azchickadee (Signed) on Jun 08, 2010 10:38 pm (Chapter 3)

you already know the parts that I loved in this chapter :)  I think you are doing an incredible job and I still don't believe this is the first time you've written creativly like this.....anyway, can't wait to find out what happens next!  I love the tension between these two!!! 



Author's Response: Heeeee! Thank you! :D



musicmel (Signed) on Jun 08, 2010 10:31 pm (Chapter 3)
Hmmmm. its goign to be very interesting with the two of them. She is clearly not sure about marrying him. She doesn't want the guy that is away all the time.

Author's Response: I hope it's interesting! Haha. But yes, Gemma's never really sure about anything, really.





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