Comments For Persuasion
Timberlake (Signed) on Aug 02, 2010 06:48 pm (Chapter 4)

Justin pushed in the chair with a thud and ran his hands up and down the wooden arms. Still looking down he answered Trace. "We're just way too different." that was such a sad moment. omg, i feel like justin's gonna have a fucking meltdown and damn it i wanna know WTF happened! all these little clues and reminders, but i want to know what shit hit the fan that caused this mess!... that is all. onto the next!



Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Justin, he's clearly still trippin about Gemma. And ohhh, you just wait until the next couple chapters...all I have to say is that Justin only allows himself to be sad for so long...after awhile it just gets old.

 

:D Fun is to come, I promise.




amai84 (Signed) on Jul 13, 2010 09:50 pm (Chapter 4)
I was just thinking about this story the other day. I love it. Can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: Yay! I'm glad you liked it! I'm working on the next chapter right now, and hopefully I can get it up within the week! Thanks for the review!



azchickadee (Signed) on Jul 12, 2010 11:43 pm (Chapter 4)
I've already given you some of my thoughts on this chapter :)  but I just have to say publicly how much I love this story and the ideas you have planned!!  I love how convinced Justin is that he can do this when we all know he's just lying to himslef!  lol...The boy has still got it SO bad for her...I love that Trace keeps pushing him about it.  Hopefully someday Justin will realize what's going on and stop being so mad at Trace.  The guy is only trying to help!  lol.  Love it, girly!  Can't wait for the next one :)

Author's Response: YAY! I'm so bad at responding to reviews, and we've already talked, but I feel like a jerk just to skip it..soooo. HEY THANKS!





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