Comments For Persuasion
justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Jun 08, 2010 11:11 pm (Chapter 3)
oh i love them already-- it's cool to see the glimpses of each of their personalities through the other person. can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Aww! I'm so glad you love them! They are very very cute, I'm sure you'll see soon :D!


azchickadee (Signed) on Jun 08, 2010 10:38 pm (Chapter 3)

you already know the parts that I loved in this chapter :)  I think you are doing an incredible job and I still don't believe this is the first time you've written creativly like this.....anyway, can't wait to find out what happens next!  I love the tension between these two!!! 



Author's Response: Heeeee! Thank you! :D


musicmel (Signed) on Jun 08, 2010 10:31 pm (Chapter 3)
Hmmmm. its goign to be very interesting with the two of them. She is clearly not sure about marrying him. She doesn't want the guy that is away all the time.

Author's Response: I hope it's interesting! Haha. But yes, Gemma's never really sure about anything, really.


amai84 (Signed) on Jun 03, 2010 06:46 pm (Chapter 2)
I love this! Great plot. Great writing. Can't wait for more.

Author's Response: Oh, I'm so glad you liked it! I'm working on the third chapter right now so hopefully it'll be up before the weekend is over! :)


justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on May 31, 2010 10:54 am (Chapter 2)
ahhh!! so good. i'm already (too) excited for them to get back together... haha. update soon! :)

Author's Response: Yay! I'm excited you like it so much! :D


musicmel (Signed) on May 28, 2010 07:45 am (Chapter 2)

Oh no. She is engaged. This is going to get very interesting! Love it!



Author's Response: She is! :(, but yes, haha veeeery interesting indeed!


azchickadee (Signed) on May 28, 2010 07:34 am (Chapter 2)
love it!!  I love all the changes and things you added :)  Great job!!  What happens next, what happens next???  lol

Author's Response: hahaha, THANK YOU. For your review and of course your wonderful HELP! :)


musicmel (Signed) on May 28, 2010 07:31 am (Chapter 1)
I'm interested thats for sure! Bring it on your doing a great job!!!

Author's Response: So I'm so late, but THANK YOU :D


justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on May 22, 2010 08:50 pm (Chapter 1)
great start! really excited to see where this goes! update soon. :)

Author's Response: I'm super late, but THANK YOU! :D


anonyme (Anonymous) on May 22, 2010 06:57 pm (Chapter 1)
i love this story!! it is amazingly written and  i'm curious to see what will happen next! please update soon

Author's Response: YAY! I'm seriously working on the second chapter right now, I'm so glad you're enthusiastic about it!


azchickadee (Signed) on May 22, 2010 05:59 pm (Chapter 1)

interesting storyline.  I'm definitely intersted to see how it goes.  Is Justin who he is in real life, or is he doing something else besides music?  I love the name Gemma and I'm looking forward to finding out more about her :)

If you're still looking for a beta I'm available if you need someone to bounce ideas off on and proof-read :)  I'm on twitter (cherylmclaws) or MSN (azchick25). 



Author's Response:

Justin isn't who he is in real life...the next couple chapters I'm hoping to flesh out some facts about who they are and what he's doing back in town. I love the name Gemma too :D.

 I'm TOTALLY still looking for a beta and I would looooove to be able to bounce ideas off and everything. I'll add you on msn, I'm madeleineee@live.com.



Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 22, 2010 10:36 am (Chapter 1)
I really lke this so far!!! Update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: Yay! Thanks for the review! I'm writing the second chapter right now!


Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 22, 2010 08:47 am (Chapter 1)
loved it! Can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! :) Thanks for the review!


imikimi (Signed) on May 22, 2010 05:02 am (Chapter 1)
I really like it and you are a very good writer! Post more SOON!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I am writing the second chapter right now!




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