Comments For Displaced Deception
Lynn (Signed) on Aug 18, 2007 01:55 am ('Hi, Ho!')
i ca't belive i never started reading this! I STILL love Lauren and Justin! Hit me up girl! grumpyfrompa on AIM



crash coincidence (Signed) on Jun 06, 2007 03:15 pm ('Hi, Ho!')
how much did i love the slip of the 8 year old....SO much. seriously amazingness right there. as for the ciggy in the car incident... i had almost forgotten that justin is an ass, back on that boat again. overall loving this is no surprise...

Author's Response: Yup he is an ass, but he's trying to keep it in check. I'm so happy you're enjoying the story so far! Update is coming soon of course... - Amanda



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 05, 2007 12:01 pm ('Hi, Ho!')
LoL. What a great story. I'm in love with it. I wanted to kill Trace and blush like made for Lauren during dinner. LoL. I totally cracked up when he started talking about the 'noises' coming from Justin's room. I can't wait to see what else is to come for them. :-D. Update more soon! -Traci

Author's Response: Thank you so much Traci! I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far and yeah, Trace is a tool in this story -but a funny one at that. Update coming soon. 



smrkks (Signed) on Jun 04, 2007 02:57 pm ('Hi, Ho!')
god what a bunch of morons lol. i love how real you make trace and justin though. and jonathon.. well, i dont think i even need to say anything. lol love it.

Author's Response: Thanks Stace! I figured if Justin and Trace ever go home they act like a bunch of white trash. And for some reason I think Trace would think up of a ridiculous name...hence the M. Mob. Glad you enjoyed it :) - Amanda



Hollie (Signed) on Jun 04, 2007 11:39 am ('Hi, Ho!')
See? What did I say about getting it on with children in the next room? It only ever leads to badness, even if it's fun in the short term.

Author's Response: Yeah but they can look back on it now and laugh hysterically. So what if Lauren's image is further tainted in the eyes of his family? Don't tell me you wouldn't do that if you had the chance! - Amanda



alimera (Signed) on Jun 04, 2007 09:06 am ('Hi, Ho!')
oh man...trace and justin get weirder and weirder. lol. update again soon!

Author's Response: Yeah Trace and Justin are just total guys. That's what you get when you have a brother and all his friends come over - pure insanity. Thanks as always for the review :) - Amanda



nameless (Signed) on Jun 03, 2007 08:10 pm ('Hi, Ho!')
Haha...I'd be moaning too if I was with Thrustin' Justin. Love it!

Author's Response: Wouldn't we all? *lol* Thanks for the review :) 



Chelsia (Signed) on Jun 03, 2007 06:43 pm ('Hi, Ho!')
just read the past 2 chapters and i'm even more in love with story than before. love the characters, LOVED moanin' lauren. that definitely made me laugh. can't wait for more :)

Author's Response: Glad it made you laugh, tis what I was going for :) I'm so happy you're enjoying this story and the update is coming soon! - Amanda





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