Comments For Displaced Deception
smrkks (Signed) on Sep 19, 2007 01:07 pm (The Walters Company)
that really was incredibly, inredibly hilarious. everything. the bow on theo's head, the picture. godddd love love love lauren walters.



alimera (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 10:55 am (The Walters Company)
hahahahahaha...you've done it once again! love it, update again soon!

Author's Response: Update is up and thanks so much for reading! -Amanda



Maggie (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 08:19 am (The Walters Company)

Wow, talk about Christmas suprises. A new brother is certainly going to top my list for biggest shock value. Wonderful job.



Author's Response: Thanks Maggie! Yeah finding out you have a 'brother' is kind of a big thing. If my parents sprung that on me, my response would probably be a lot worse than Lauren's. Thanks for checking the story out as well! - Amanda



Vessy (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 07:06 am (The Walters Company)
awesome!

Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! Glad you're liking it so far :) = Amanda



Hollie (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 04:24 am (The Walters Company)
Yup, there she blows…and I’m not just thinking about Lauren. That was filthy. That really cracked me up. Anyway, I'm almost as amazed as Justin that he was so altruistic... but who the heck adopts a kid for four years and neglects to mention it to their actual child? That's just weird *lol8

Author's Response: For some odd reason Hollie, I tend to channel guys whenever I write Justin. And they didn't really adopt Theodore per se, they just kind of picked him up and he was their assistant and taught him the ropes and they grew to love him has a son. And Lauren's parents are pretty freaking crazy and they forget things all the time. lol. GO UPDATE LOVELIGHT! :P - Amanda



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Jun 20, 2007 12:09 am (The Walters Company)
Hmm. I don't know about this guy. It's an interesting twist though. Awesome job once again and I can't wait to see what else is to come. :-D -Traci

Author's Response: Traci, Theo is totally harmless, I promise. And I'm full of interesting twists, you'll just have to wait and see though ;) - Amanda



tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Jun 19, 2007 11:27 pm (The Walters Company)
Okay, not only is this an awesome chapter, but you are hilarious. While the bit of puke in the mouth is always a family favorite, having a heart fall out of one's ass has officially made the list of "most entertaining expressions I have come across in my lifetime." Kudos to you! Hahaha

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I like it when people think I'm funny! And I'm glad I could make the list of 'most entertaining expressions!' And thank you for the kudos. Most appreciated and of course, thank you for checking out the story and for your continuance in reading. Makes my heart not want to fall out of my ass! :) - Amanda





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