Comments For Displaced Deception
tiinydancer xx (Signed) on Oct 09, 2007 02:19 am (Chapter 12)
Just read this chapter for the first time and can I say I'm JEALOUS that you've seen that movie and I haven't and that I'm also really happy that you included the Beatles in this chapter? Holy lord. Sensational.
Loving this, even though I'm behind on reading...
Loving this, even though I'm behind on reading...
Hollie (Signed) on Sep 17, 2007 12:18 pm (Chapter 12)
Just an extra review to say I'm glad I'm not the only one who picked up on the "was it Maura's doing or did she swipe credit that wasn't hers" thing.
Author's Response: Yeah glad some people picked up on that. Granted I'm not going to say anyting about it right now lol so you'll just have to wait until later for it to be explained! Love you Hollie babe! - Amanda
Author's Response: Yeah glad some people picked up on that. Granted I'm not going to say anyting about it right now lol so you'll just have to wait until later for it to be explained! Love you Hollie babe! - Amanda
Chelsia (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 06:26 pm (Chapter 12)
ok so i let myself have an extended break from my homework and got myself caught up on this story...i love them together SO MUCH. sooo....don't let them fight, k?
oh and three cheers for bringing the story up to canada. us canadians need a bit of justin loving every once in a while :)
Author's Response: Like I said in response to an earlier review, Canada is fun! I enjoy Canada and wish I could go back to visit. It's been a while since I've been there. And I can't make promises about fights lol - Amanda
oh and three cheers for bringing the story up to canada. us canadians need a bit of justin loving every once in a while :)
Author's Response: Like I said in response to an earlier review, Canada is fun! I enjoy Canada and wish I could go back to visit. It's been a while since I've been there. And I can't make promises about fights lol - Amanda
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 05:37 pm (Chapter 12)
Author's Response: Crazy rantings are my favorite....and that feeling of deja vu is probably one of the weirdest things to experience ever. It's happened a handful of times to me and I don't like it at all lol. Thanks for the review and an update is coming up! - Amanda
So, as I was reading this chapter I had a total episode of deja vu of deja vu. if that makes sense. There's a scene in here that I swear I remember reading before (not saying you've copied, just saying I've had this moment, lol) and as I'm thinking that I've read this before I'm also thinking that I've written a review telling you that this chapter gave me deja vu.
Whew, that was long and confusing. I hope you can decipher my crazy ranting. I loved, LOVED the update :)
Author's Response: Crazy rantings are my favorite....and that feeling of deja vu is probably one of the weirdest things to experience ever. It's happened a handful of times to me and I don't like it at all lol. Thanks for the review and an update is coming up! - Amanda
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 01:18 pm (Chapter 12)
Okay, I'm upset he's giving Maura credit for it...lol... she didn't do anything it was Trace and Lauren who decided to come out. Right? Or did I miss something. Anyway, besides that ... I LOVED the chapter and am SO glad that Justin got his b-day wish. I can't wait to see what is to come (as usual) and glad that the updates have been frequent. Anyway, awesome job as usual! ttyl -Traci
Author's Response: The whole 'did Maura get them out to Canada or was it their own doing' might show up in a future chapter. I'm not going to say anything about it right now beacuse its sort of a small spoiler. And yeah, a happy Justin is a happy world and hopefully he can stay happy for a few more chapters. But again, you'll have to wait and see *cackles* I'm glad the updates are frequent as well. Lately I just can't stop writing and that's bad because I have homework to attend to. But I can't help it when the creative juices start to flow! lol Update coming soon, and thanks again Traci! - Amanda
Author's Response: The whole 'did Maura get them out to Canada or was it their own doing' might show up in a future chapter. I'm not going to say anything about it right now beacuse its sort of a small spoiler. And yeah, a happy Justin is a happy world and hopefully he can stay happy for a few more chapters. But again, you'll have to wait and see *cackles* I'm glad the updates are frequent as well. Lately I just can't stop writing and that's bad because I have homework to attend to. But I can't help it when the creative juices start to flow! lol Update coming soon, and thanks again Traci! - Amanda
MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 10:17 am (Chapter 12)
How cuuuuuuuute. I loved this chapter. Lauren and Justin are so cute and sweet together. After 'Deranged Delusions' and how much of a jerk Justin was in that story I wasn't a huge fan of his character. But this chapter totally changed my mind. And I was really hoping that Lauren would just stay and say screw the hotel job. Oh, well. Please update soon.
Author's Response: I adored writing this chapter and yeah, it definitely offers a different side to Justin than from what we've seen. And yeah, Lauren should quit, but she's proud and a workaholic and she can't sit still. I think if she did go on tour with Justin it would drive her crazy not being able to do anything. But of course she might go work for him, you'll just have to see how the rest of the chapters play out. Update is coming soon! Thanks again! - Amanda
Author's Response: I adored writing this chapter and yeah, it definitely offers a different side to Justin than from what we've seen. And yeah, Lauren should quit, but she's proud and a workaholic and she can't sit still. I think if she did go on tour with Justin it would drive her crazy not being able to do anything. But of course she might go work for him, you'll just have to see how the rest of the chapters play out. Update is coming soon! Thanks again! - Amanda
alimera (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 08:52 am (Chapter 12)
okay, before i say ANYTHING, i must comment on this:
“Thank God, man,” Trace quips as he browses the menu, “she was getting unbearable at home. I know you loosened that pu….” But his words are cut off when there’s a loud thud coming from underneath the table and the condiments, silverware, and mugs for coffee jump a few inches around the table. “OUCH, bitch that hurt!” Trace yelps as he leans forward and rubs what I’m sure is his leg.
i DIED when i read that! i totally had the image of lauren kicking the shit out of trace and the table rattling like that and i died laughing. you did it to me again!!
anyhoo, loved the Beatles reference! and i loved that lauren was able to surprise him and give him a nice birthday. too bad he couldn't cancel everything and spend more time with her though--but she made it out there! that's what counted. hopefully there won't be any more drama--but if there wasn't any drama, there wouldn't be a story for you to write, would there? ugh. haha, update again soon!!
Author's Response: Oh the drama will be around before you realize it, m'dear. I apologize for that, but it has to happen. And yeah I got a good mental picture when I was writing that. Trace kills me sometimes lol. An update is coming soon and thanks for all the love! - Amanda
“Thank God, man,” Trace quips as he browses the menu, “she was getting unbearable at home. I know you loosened that pu….” But his words are cut off when there’s a loud thud coming from underneath the table and the condiments, silverware, and mugs for coffee jump a few inches around the table. “OUCH, bitch that hurt!” Trace yelps as he leans forward and rubs what I’m sure is his leg.
i DIED when i read that! i totally had the image of lauren kicking the shit out of trace and the table rattling like that and i died laughing. you did it to me again!!
anyhoo, loved the Beatles reference! and i loved that lauren was able to surprise him and give him a nice birthday. too bad he couldn't cancel everything and spend more time with her though--but she made it out there! that's what counted. hopefully there won't be any more drama--but if there wasn't any drama, there wouldn't be a story for you to write, would there? ugh. haha, update again soon!!
Author's Response: Oh the drama will be around before you realize it, m'dear. I apologize for that, but it has to happen. And yeah I got a good mental picture when I was writing that. Trace kills me sometimes lol. An update is coming soon and thanks for all the love! - Amanda
Hollie (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 07:40 am (Chapter 12)
John lennon references do not have to be apologised for *lol*
Author's Response: Ha. Yeah, the man is legend and probably the most amazing musician in the history of music (sorry Justin). I adore him. I'm actually listening to Imagine right now. Such a beautiful song and so poignant to today. Love you girl! Update is on the way....go get Lovelight updated now! - Amanda
Author's Response: Ha. Yeah, the man is legend and probably the most amazing musician in the history of music (sorry Justin). I adore him. I'm actually listening to Imagine right now. Such a beautiful song and so poignant to today. Love you girl! Update is on the way....go get Lovelight updated now! - Amanda
angel_from_africa (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 04:33 am (Chapter 12)
i LOVE this story!! And Justin is so funny!! lol.. keep up the good work!!
Author's Response: Thanks sweetie! Justin is a crackhead lol...I have no idea where his character comes from. I'll keep y'all updated on this story! I'm working on the next chapter right now! - Amanda
Author's Response: Thanks sweetie! Justin is a crackhead lol...I have no idea where his character comes from. I'll keep y'all updated on this story! I'm working on the next chapter right now! - Amanda
Vessy (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 04:26 am (Chapter 12)
great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks, as always, Vessy! Update coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Thanks, as always, Vessy! Update coming soon! - Amanda
