Comments For Displaced Deception
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Sep 24, 2007 01:07 pm (Hero to Zero)
I'm jus at a lost for words. That was such an intense and great chapter! Nice job as usual. I can't wait to see what is gonna happen, I'm jus so confused ... though I have a theory ... but who knows. Anyway, great job again hope more is to come soon! ttyl -Traci
Author's Response: Traci, I freaking love theories. Email me yours, I want to know what you're thinking! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and an update should be coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Traci, I freaking love theories. Email me yours, I want to know what you're thinking! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and an update should be coming soon! - Amanda
smrkks (Signed) on Sep 23, 2007 03:53 pm (Hero to Zero)
"You can go fuck her brains out and then she can steal all your clothes." That was just like a really funny comment. But jesus christ amandaa that really just totally took the breath out of me. and justin is such a dickhead... shocker. i did love it though.. especially the sheer intensity of the whole chapter. update sooooooon? :)
Author's Response: Yeah well I do love me some dickhead Justin, but not when he's being a dickhead to Lauren. But oh well. I'm glad you loved the chapter and an update is coming soon! I just have to finish writing it lol - Amanda
Author's Response: Yeah well I do love me some dickhead Justin, but not when he's being a dickhead to Lauren. But oh well. I'm glad you loved the chapter and an update is coming soon! I just have to finish writing it lol - Amanda
Lynn (Signed) on Sep 23, 2007 01:13 am (Hero to Zero)
WOW! Well I saw that coming...far, far in the distance. I cried. GOOD JOb!
Author's Response: Really, you cried? Dayum Lynn my bad. lol I'm glad you liked the chapter. An update is coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Really, you cried? Dayum Lynn my bad. lol I'm glad you liked the chapter. An update is coming soon! - Amanda
Liz (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 06:12 pm (Hero to Zero)
Holy SHIT. You know it's an amazing story when it kept popping up in my head all day and i'd get annoyed cause I want Lauren to go back- Justin to fire that stupid ass whore- and the two of them to make babies and live happily ever after.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Liz for thinking it's an amazing story. I'm sorry if it annoyed you, but yeah my character can get annoying at times. Maura La Whora...gotta love the homewrecker lol. And Lauren and Justin baybays....hmmm interesting. And the happily ever after thing...could be a possibility, but I kind of like the drama of them being apart don't you? I'm sorry, I'm just messing...maybe :P Thanks for the review and an update is coming soon. I apologize for my responses....it's close to 2 AM, Justin is on my television screen, and I am delerious with exhaustion. - Amanda
Author's Response: Thank you so much Liz for thinking it's an amazing story. I'm sorry if it annoyed you, but yeah my character can get annoying at times. Maura La Whora...gotta love the homewrecker lol. And Lauren and Justin baybays....hmmm interesting. And the happily ever after thing...could be a possibility, but I kind of like the drama of them being apart don't you? I'm sorry, I'm just messing...maybe :P Thanks for the review and an update is coming soon. I apologize for my responses....it's close to 2 AM, Justin is on my television screen, and I am delerious with exhaustion. - Amanda
ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 03:18 pm (Hero to Zero)
Author's Response: No I was kind of muttering it under my breath as she was speeding away. But would you want to go back to a guy who was saying he was sleeping with his employee just to piss you off? And sadly, they are over. And I can't divulge anything about the stuff. You may find out in the future, or Maura can just stick around for the rest of Justin's life...muahaha. - Amanda
NOOOOOOO! GO BACK LAUREN!!!
Is it sad that I was screaming that outloud to my computer screen for the last part of the chapter???
They can't be over. They just can't. Stupid pride. Always gets in their way huh??
I still want to know where the other missing stuff is, and how it disappeared from Maura's closet...
Author's Response: No I was kind of muttering it under my breath as she was speeding away. But would you want to go back to a guy who was saying he was sleeping with his employee just to piss you off? And sadly, they are over. And I can't divulge anything about the stuff. You may find out in the future, or Maura can just stick around for the rest of Justin's life...muahaha. - Amanda
amai84 (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 02:00 pm (Hero to Zero)
Well, that was intense, but so very good.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the chapter and you thought it was intense :) An update is coming soon and thanks for the review! - Amanda
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the chapter and you thought it was intense :) An update is coming soon and thanks for the review! - Amanda
Vessy (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 01:58 pm (Hero to Zero)
wow, that was really good, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! More is on the way! - Amanda
Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! More is on the way! - Amanda
Chelsia (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 12:24 pm (Hero to Zero)
well geez. the whole time i was reading that i was thinking 'no, no...just calm down...both of you STOP' but alas, it continued to the end....i should just get mad at you but everyone knows how good drama is in a story. but i definitely think maura needs to GO AWAY and justin and lauren need to go find their deserted island and sort this all out
Author's Response: Please don't be mad at me, drama is good for all sorts of stories, including this one! And yeah Maura needs to go away but I don't know if she's going anywhere any time soon. I might be finding a travel agent to see if they can get that desert island for 'em. Don't know if that'll happen since Lauren kind of hates Justin right now. That'd actually be kind of freaking hilarious. Hmm *goes to ponder* - Amanda
Author's Response: Please don't be mad at me, drama is good for all sorts of stories, including this one! And yeah Maura needs to go away but I don't know if she's going anywhere any time soon. I might be finding a travel agent to see if they can get that desert island for 'em. Don't know if that'll happen since Lauren kind of hates Justin right now. That'd actually be kind of freaking hilarious. Hmm *goes to ponder* - Amanda
aswift (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 10:31 am (Hero to Zero)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the chapter and the next one is coming up! I just have to start writing it lol. Thanks mucho m'dear! - Amanda
Aghhhh!!! That was awesome. I got so caught up on it that my heart was racing. I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked the chapter and the next one is coming up! I just have to start writing it lol. Thanks mucho m'dear! - Amanda
alimera (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 08:51 am (Hero to Zero)
jesus christ. i am utterly speechless right now. did he cheat on lauren with maura or did he just say that to piss her off? either way, i am NOT happy with his stupid ass. NOT AT ALL.
now i want you to keep the updates coming before i tear every bit of my hair out with worry. thank you!
Author's Response: Please don't pull a Britney and pull out all your hair. Not a good thing. And he didn't sleep with Maura at all. He just said that to piss Lauren off and I think he succeeded, don't you think? And no one is happy with his stupid ass...I'm not pleased with him either. The updates will continue, you guys are awesome with the feedback and that just makes me want to write even more! Thanks for all your feedback and yes, update is on its way! - Amanda
now i want you to keep the updates coming before i tear every bit of my hair out with worry. thank you!
Author's Response: Please don't pull a Britney and pull out all your hair. Not a good thing. And he didn't sleep with Maura at all. He just said that to piss Lauren off and I think he succeeded, don't you think? And no one is happy with his stupid ass...I'm not pleased with him either. The updates will continue, you guys are awesome with the feedback and that just makes me want to write even more! Thanks for all your feedback and yes, update is on its way! - Amanda
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 08:12 am (Hero to Zero)
I don't want them to break up...no no no no no! Please....make this better....please!!!
Author's Response: They have, sadly, already broken up. I might make it better, I might not. Justin said some pretty messed up crap, and so did Lauren come to think of it. But I will update soon, how 'bout that? - Amanda
Author's Response: They have, sadly, already broken up. I might make it better, I might not. Justin said some pretty messed up crap, and so did Lauren come to think of it. But I will update soon, how 'bout that? - Amanda
glitter15 (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 07:52 am (Hero to Zero)
Author's Response: STFU bish. And I know your thoughts on your adopted baybay - you tell me all the time. Now send me that outline bish! - Amanda
Dude, Amanda, you didn't have to bust me out like that and say sorry for the grammar errors like your editor is too stupid to find them! I only stopped editing at like the very end ya old bag! ROFL.
Anyways, bish, my god, I love my adopted baby aka DD2. It's the fucking shit. Pure, pure genius...especially all the stuff I contribute. LMAO Mwuahahhahhahaha. Anyways, I LOVE IT! lps for life bitch. You're one of my favorite authors, but I kinda can't stand Justin. :D But you know my thoughts on THAT.
Author's Response: STFU bish. And I know your thoughts on your adopted baybay - you tell me all the time. Now send me that outline bish! - Amanda
Hollie (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 07:07 am (Hero to Zero)
I'm still at a loss as to how Maura managed to not only move all that stuff but plant something on Theo, unless you're totally setting Maura up and there's another culprit altogether. Hmm. This is far too taxing for my brain on a Saturday morning.
Author's Response: I never meant for your brain to be taxed. And I won't say anything about the moving of the stuff and the Theo thing. Like I said, that will come in due course and yes. Thanks for the love, Hollie, and thank you for Lovelight. No, seriously. Update it soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: I never meant for your brain to be taxed. And I won't say anything about the moving of the stuff and the Theo thing. Like I said, that will come in due course and yes. Thanks for the love, Hollie, and thank you for Lovelight. No, seriously. Update it soon! - Amanda
Miraclebabe (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 06:02 am (Hero to Zero)
I don't like this at all. Is he crazy what would make him trip like that justin need his ass beat. I want maura's blood all over the wall that bitch neeeds to go down. WTF Theo . i need more and soon cause this is just too good and too much but I love it.
Author's Response: Yeah Justin is an insane individual. And my goodness people have got some death wishes for Maura, my goodness! And yeah the Theo thing...well not going to comment on that. More is on it's way and I'm glad you're liking it so far! Thanks, as always, for your feedback - Amanda
Author's Response: Yeah Justin is an insane individual. And my goodness people have got some death wishes for Maura, my goodness! And yeah the Theo thing...well not going to comment on that. More is on it's way and I'm glad you're liking it so far! Thanks, as always, for your feedback - Amanda
Kathleenie (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 02:05 am (Hero to Zero)
What a powerful chapter. I was actually in tears when Justin said he had slept with Maura to Lauren. I can't wait to see what happens next. Please post soon!
Author's Response: Man I am just making people cry all over the place and no one is sick or dead or anything! Good lord. Thank you for the review and the update is coming soon! Much love - Amanda
Author's Response: Man I am just making people cry all over the place and no one is sick or dead or anything! Good lord. Thank you for the review and the update is coming soon! Much love - Amanda
