Comments For Displaced Deception
Jamie Lynn (Signed) on Oct 22, 2007 09:33 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Good! Hurry, hurry, hurry with Chapter 20! Dont leave me in the trenches!
ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Oct 19, 2007 12:48 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
I second the "WHAT THE FUCK?". If he doesn't believe Lauren after this, I am going to quit this story... yes that is a threat. Really that's an empty threat. I won't quit the story because it is my form of drugs, but I will be very very angry with much swearing at my computer screen (which means you won't hear it and what good does that do me?). So in other words, just please update!!!!
Author's Response: Hah...will he believe Lauren? Can;t make any promises because Maura could pull the wool over his eyes again...who knows. You'll have to stay tuned for the next chapter (which is coming soon, I promise!). Thanks for the review and for all the support! Much love! - Amanda
Author's Response: Hah...will he believe Lauren? Can;t make any promises because Maura could pull the wool over his eyes again...who knows. You'll have to stay tuned for the next chapter (which is coming soon, I promise!). Thanks for the review and for all the support! Much love! - Amanda
lesanne (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 09:53 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
oh my goodness. so good. so bad but so good.
Author's Response: Glad you thought it was good. Did you think it was bad because Lauren got herself into a fight and the can of worms has gotten bigger? - Amanda
Author's Response: Glad you thought it was good. Did you think it was bad because Lauren got herself into a fight and the can of worms has gotten bigger? - Amanda
wpoohbear (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 06:51 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Finally he knows!!!! Next chapter!!! Loved the fight scene. I could toally picture the whole thing.
Author's Response: Glad you got the picture, I was worried people wouldn't let it materalize. And yup, he knows now...finally. Hopefully he can stop being an ass and an idiot and apologize and the like. Next chapter is comingup soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Glad you got the picture, I was worried people wouldn't let it materalize. And yup, he knows now...finally. Hopefully he can stop being an ass and an idiot and apologize and the like. Next chapter is comingup soon! - Amanda
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 03:55 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
oh snap. good, get rid of that bitch! and I think JT and Trace should've let them go at it a little longer, I would've loved to see Lauren kick the shit out of Maura some more!
Author's Response: Yes, but then Lauren would be thrown in a foreign jail and that wouldn't be good at all. And who's to say Lauren's done with Maura? Hah. Glad you liked the chapter and more is coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Yes, but then Lauren would be thrown in a foreign jail and that wouldn't be good at all. And who's to say Lauren's done with Maura? Hah. Glad you liked the chapter and more is coming soon! - Amanda
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 02:00 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
"...I suppose you could wag out with your vag out, but that doesn’t sound sanitary or as cool…”
That has got to be the funniest line. I seriously laughed out loud reading it. I love Trace. Well, I love you for writing Trace so well. :-P.
BUT, back to other topics! I was hoping Justin and Lauren would be able to work things out but seeing as in the end of this chapter she's pretty much down and out with the alcohol in her system (not to mention the damage Maura did to her), and FINALLY Justin caught Maura in the ACT! OoO! I can't wait for her to get what's coming to her. LoL.
But awesome job as usual! I hope the next chapter is comin soon!
-Traci
Author's Response: Yeah I freaking LOVE that line lol. Sometimes I don't get where all the pervetedness comes from. Yup, Maura has been caught in the act! I'm glad you liked the chapter and the next update is coming soon. Thank you so much for all the love, Traci! - Amanda
That has got to be the funniest line. I seriously laughed out loud reading it. I love Trace. Well, I love you for writing Trace so well. :-P.
BUT, back to other topics! I was hoping Justin and Lauren would be able to work things out but seeing as in the end of this chapter she's pretty much down and out with the alcohol in her system (not to mention the damage Maura did to her), and FINALLY Justin caught Maura in the ACT! OoO! I can't wait for her to get what's coming to her. LoL.
But awesome job as usual! I hope the next chapter is comin soon!
-Traci
Author's Response: Yeah I freaking LOVE that line lol. Sometimes I don't get where all the pervetedness comes from. Yup, Maura has been caught in the act! I'm glad you liked the chapter and the next update is coming soon. Thank you so much for all the love, Traci! - Amanda
Kathleenie (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 01:58 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. But I'm glad you liked the chapter. And never thought about Maura selling the story to the paps...interesting twist. You'll get the back story sooner rather than later :) More is coming soon! Thanks for the review! - Amanda
Oh my God, I love this chapter! Maura probably planned on stealing Justin's belongings and then running to the paps and selling the fight story. Bitch! Can't wait to find out what the back story is between Lauren and Maura--you know there is something from their Stanford days!
Post more soon! PLEASE!
Author's Response: Maybe, maybe not. But I'm glad you liked the chapter. And never thought about Maura selling the story to the paps...interesting twist. You'll get the back story sooner rather than later :) More is coming soon! Thanks for the review! - Amanda
alimera (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 01:15 pm (Pink Elephants on Parade)
hahahahahahahahahahahaha! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOT! okay, on one hand, i am so fucking thrilled that lauren beat the shit out of maura la whora! two, justin caught her in the act! but noooooooooooooow--he's going to have to do a shitload of groveling and kiss assing to get back in lauren's good graces. yeah, you're an idiot, justin...you should've listened to lauren from the very beginning! omg, you better have that next chapter up soon!
Author's Response: Hmm excited much lol. And yes, Justin will have to do a crap load of groveling and ass kissing. Chapter is coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Hmm excited much lol. And yes, Justin will have to do a crap load of groveling and ass kissing. Chapter is coming soon! - Amanda
Hollie (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 10:49 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Oh, and I don't think "you were a bitch back then" actually refers to when Maura first started working for Justin, either. I have other reasons for thinking this from previous chapters... or maybe i just read way too much into crap. I dunno. More soon.
Author's Response: Oh I don't know...you should totally email me and tell me your other reasons because I'm a stickler for knowing what people think will happen with the story and the like. But you'll find out in the next chapter for reals lol. Much love girl - Amanda
Author's Response: Oh I don't know...you should totally email me and tell me your other reasons because I'm a stickler for knowing what people think will happen with the story and the like. But you'll find out in the next chapter for reals lol. Much love girl - Amanda
Hollie (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 10:47 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Well NOW he realises? stupid bastard. i bet she was going to try and frame Lauren, too. anyway, Queen was too cute, and if they're going to the West End they should so go see We Will Rock You. if they're still going after all that...
Author's Response: OMG Hollie! I fucking LOVED We Will Rock You! I saw it in Vegas like 8 times and saw it in London twice...and will be seeing it again next summer if they renew (and if I get to go back). Yeah...definitely one of my most favorite muscials and you get like a billion cool points for referencing it lol. And yeah, Justin is a stupid bastard. Got a lot of apologising to do...haha. - Amanda
Author's Response: OMG Hollie! I fucking LOVED We Will Rock You! I saw it in Vegas like 8 times and saw it in London twice...and will be seeing it again next summer if they renew (and if I get to go back). Yeah...definitely one of my most favorite muscials and you get like a billion cool points for referencing it lol. And yeah, Justin is a stupid bastard. Got a lot of apologising to do...haha. - Amanda
MissTasha (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 10:17 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
I loooooooooooooved this chapter. Maura finally got the ass beating that was coming to her. I'm surprised that she got in any hits at all. I figured she was all talk. Turns out that she's just mostly talk cause she did hurt Lauren a little bit but she did LOSE. And she got busted! Maura's getting fired! Maura's getting fired! Maura's getting fired! Please, please, please update soon. Pleeeeeeease.
Author's Response: How do you know she's getting fired? How do you know she doesn't get an explanation out of her ass and manages to make Justin believe her? Hmmmmmm? Lol I kid...maybe. You'll have to wait and see. And you know Maura can pack something of a punch. Believe me, if Lauren could walk all over her it wouldn't be that good of a read! lol Update coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: How do you know she's getting fired? How do you know she doesn't get an explanation out of her ass and manages to make Justin believe her? Hmmmmmm? Lol I kid...maybe. You'll have to wait and see. And you know Maura can pack something of a punch. Believe me, if Lauren could walk all over her it wouldn't be that good of a read! lol Update coming soon! - Amanda
Vessy (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 08:34 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
i love it
Author's Response: Thanks girl! Update coming soon! -Amanda
Author's Response: Thanks girl! Update coming soon! -Amanda
Liz (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 08:25 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
Author's Response: Thanks Liz! And I'm not making any promises on what Lauren or Justin will do. And don't apologize for the cursing...as you can tell, DD2 isn't exactly a swear free piece of work lol. Thanks for the review, update is coming soon! - Amanda
Holy-mother-fucking-shit.
Number one I apologize for the curses but really- bitch just got her punk ass beat and thank GOD she did.
And now all we have left to do is hope that Lauren will forgive Justin for not believing her in the first place b/c he better be kicking Maura's lying ass out of the door asap.
Right, I think you know what i'm going to say- INCREDIBLE chapter, can't WAIT for the next one! :)
Author's Response: Thanks Liz! And I'm not making any promises on what Lauren or Justin will do. And don't apologize for the cursing...as you can tell, DD2 isn't exactly a swear free piece of work lol. Thanks for the review, update is coming soon! - Amanda
Alicia (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 03:57 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
what a KLEPTO!!!!!
Author's Response: LOL true that. She's fucking crazy! - Amanda
Author's Response: LOL true that. She's fucking crazy! - Amanda
smrkks (Signed) on Oct 18, 2007 12:53 am (Pink Elephants on Parade)
omg omg omg omg omg FINALLY. i swear to god i am so glad that lauren finally got to beat this shit out of that stupid bitch. and amanda, chapter 20 needs to be up riiiiiiiiight about now. yeah. that sounds gooood. lol. this was a crazy ass fucking chapter. i absolutely LOVED it.
Author's Response: SO glad you liked it girl! And yeah I wasn't going to have her beat the shit out of Maura in the beginning, but I figured I'd let Lauren go a little bat shit crazy on the hoe. And don't worry...Chapter 20 will be here before you know it! Much love miss lady! - Amanda
Author's Response: SO glad you liked it girl! And yeah I wasn't going to have her beat the shit out of Maura in the beginning, but I figured I'd let Lauren go a little bat shit crazy on the hoe. And don't worry...Chapter 20 will be here before you know it! Much love miss lady! - Amanda
