Comments For Displaced Deception
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Apr 15, 2008 12:35 am (Look Through My Eyes)
Yeay! Things are workin out for everyone! I was almost scared that Trace was gonna be dating Maura or something. LoL. Awesome job as usual, sorry it took me so long to get back to you ... I got sick and had some other issues pop up but everythings good now :) BTW - this line ... Are we going to the malt shop for some milkshakes?” ... so awesome. I started dating a family friend and when people found out we were a couple one of them said "where are they gonna go, the malt shop" ... lol jus brought me back ;) Awesome job as usual, off to finish reading :) -Traci



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 13, 2008 06:36 pm (Look Through My Eyes)
I'm glad that they got back together. I totally love this.



joey (Anonymous) on Mar 01, 2008 02:13 pm (Look Through My Eyes)
please please update soon it's been awhile please



alimera (Signed) on Feb 23, 2008 09:43 am (Look Through My Eyes)
Hahahahahahaha, oh man the troll is HILARIOUS. Justin sat there and assumed, what an idiot. Thank goodness he didn't stay angry and storm out of there and make Lauren mad at him again...update again soon! Lauren is definitely falling hard again...



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 10:34 pm (Look Through My Eyes)
wow...Justin is a jackass but yeah he's a cute one. lol love the story



aswift (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 08:41 pm (Look Through My Eyes)

Yay!! I was so excited to see the update and made my whole day so much better.  I can't wait to see what else happens with Justin and Lauren.  




ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 08:33 pm (Look Through My Eyes)
Awwww I love that they are doing so well!! Justin and Lauren are my favorite! And how cute is Trace?!?! I love the three of them together!



Gabo (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 03:18 pm (Look Through My Eyes)
*melts* Justin is being TOOOOO damn cute.



Hollie (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 03:08 pm (Look Through My Eyes)
Told you it'd last about five minutes. That was awesome and i missed you!!



Madcrazychick (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 02:34 pm (Look Through My Eyes)
With all the secrecy and avoiding the topic, I thought Trace's confession was going to be something really bad. Then once I realized it was about a new woman in his life, I was like, oh, lord, is it Maura LaWhora? lol But then I thought, well, if that's true, probably wanting to talk to Lauren about it first wasn't the smartest idea. But it turned out to be some Joanna girl and him just wanting to gush about her and nothing scandalous at all. So while I'm happy that he's happy, at the same time, I'm wondering why there was a need for all this secrecy in the first place...is there something wrong with her? Something he could potentially be embarrassed about? Or is just that hard for a guy to share his emotions? lol I would have been honest with you. Communication is a key in a relationship and since you seem to have lost that you can shut the fuck up and let Trace talk and not give any idiotic commentary. Um, Loho, you lied to him about where you were going to be tonight, which was a big part of him storming in there like that, so you only get half a point for that. lol And when she was cracking up at the thought of her being attracted to Trace, I'm surprised Trace wasn't at least a little bit insulted. Even if you're not attracted to someone, you still wouldn't want them to find the mere idea of being attracted to you ridiculously hilarious. I would've been like, 'Okay, you do remember, I'm still sitting here with functional ears and a ego not made of steel, right?" lol Anyways, the whole scene with Justin busting into their 'little pow-wow for two' was pretty funny. And the "I have everything I could ever want right now" line was so perfect, especially when paired with the in love look in his eyes. Ah, I love it...in a bittersweet way. So I guess it's for moments like that that I'm glad you didn't update sooner and closer to Singles Awareness Day. lol



Hollie (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 01:40 pm (Look Through My Eyes)
*Hollie doesn;t want to leave this the review it deserves because she's still feeling unloved and abandoned and deprived. This will probably last about five minutes*



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 10:55 am (Look Through My Eyes)
WOOO!!! that was so great! I was worried there for a second that there was gonna be a big fight about Lauren and Trace being together, but I'm glad trouble was averted.  And then I thought you were gonna say that Trace was dating Maura, lol....oh....I'm glad you've updated!!!!



Vessy (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 06:27 am (Look Through My Eyes)
aw trace is in love :) great chapter! can't wait for more



MissTasha (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 05:13 am (Look Through My Eyes)
Awwwwwwwwww. Please update soon.



watchoutforthecar (Signed) on Feb 21, 2008 12:52 am (Look Through My Eyes)
Awesomeee update! I was about to go to sleep but I checked last second and WOW UPDATE!





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