Comments For Displaced Deception
jerseygirl1833 (Signed) on Sep 28, 2007 09:28 am (In a World of My Own)
omg...what a mess these 2 are!
Author's Response: I know...they're in shambles. Thanks for the review and maybe I'll make it better! Patience! - Amanda
Author's Response: I know...they're in shambles. Thanks for the review and maybe I'll make it better! Patience! - Amanda
alimera (Signed) on Sep 28, 2007 09:06 am (In a World of My Own)
no he did not. drunk or not he made out with maura and if johnny hadn't called her they would've done the unforgiveable. maura is a slut--she totally took advantage of justin's drunkenness. and justin is an asshole, kissing maura and then thinking about lauren and NOT STOPPING. ugh. i wish i could kill you but again, this story is in your hands. but if this ends badly, all bets are off! now update again soon!
Author's Response: Yeah no killing me allowed :P Update is coming soon! Thanks for the love - Amanda
Author's Response: Yeah no killing me allowed :P Update is coming soon! Thanks for the love - Amanda
Vessy (Signed) on Sep 28, 2007 08:15 am (In a World of My Own)
I love it, but I want more :)
Author's Response: More is on the way! - Amanda
Author's Response: More is on the way! - Amanda
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 28, 2007 07:16 am (In a World of My Own)
Author's Response: Oh Maura...such a homewrecker. And yeah I love how stubborn the two of them are, makes for an interesting read, yeah? - Amanda
So, I really thought I was going to have to write myself into this story so I could strangle Maura for Lauren...but, I'm glad I don't. And...these two have to be the most stubborn and pigheaded people I've ever read about!
And...with that...I loved it!
Author's Response: Oh Maura...such a homewrecker. And yeah I love how stubborn the two of them are, makes for an interesting read, yeah? - Amanda
MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 28, 2007 03:58 am (In a World of My Own)
I see that Justin the asshole is back. For a dude that is still interested in getting Lauren back someday he's really being a dumbass. I'm officially off the Justin-is-a-nice-guy-after-all train that I boarded a few chapters back. And Lauren has lost it. Where is my screw-em Lauren? Where has she gone? Twenty pounds, blotchy skin, 24/7 ice cream, and a demotion? This whole thing sucks. But I still love the story. Please update soon.
Author's Response: She might be coming back sooner than you think. And yeah, Justin is an ass hat lol - Amanda
Author's Response: She might be coming back sooner than you think. And yeah, Justin is an ass hat lol - Amanda
Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Sep 24, 2007 01:07 pm (Hero to Zero)
I'm jus at a lost for words. That was such an intense and great chapter! Nice job as usual. I can't wait to see what is gonna happen, I'm jus so confused ... though I have a theory ... but who knows. Anyway, great job again hope more is to come soon! ttyl -Traci
Author's Response: Traci, I freaking love theories. Email me yours, I want to know what you're thinking! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and an update should be coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Traci, I freaking love theories. Email me yours, I want to know what you're thinking! I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter and an update should be coming soon! - Amanda
smrkks (Signed) on Sep 23, 2007 03:53 pm (Hero to Zero)
"You can go fuck her brains out and then she can steal all your clothes." That was just like a really funny comment. But jesus christ amandaa that really just totally took the breath out of me. and justin is such a dickhead... shocker. i did love it though.. especially the sheer intensity of the whole chapter. update sooooooon? :)
Author's Response: Yeah well I do love me some dickhead Justin, but not when he's being a dickhead to Lauren. But oh well. I'm glad you loved the chapter and an update is coming soon! I just have to finish writing it lol - Amanda
Author's Response: Yeah well I do love me some dickhead Justin, but not when he's being a dickhead to Lauren. But oh well. I'm glad you loved the chapter and an update is coming soon! I just have to finish writing it lol - Amanda
Lynn (Signed) on Sep 23, 2007 01:13 am (Hero to Zero)
WOW! Well I saw that coming...far, far in the distance. I cried. GOOD JOb!
Author's Response: Really, you cried? Dayum Lynn my bad. lol I'm glad you liked the chapter. An update is coming soon! - Amanda
Author's Response: Really, you cried? Dayum Lynn my bad. lol I'm glad you liked the chapter. An update is coming soon! - Amanda
justinzgirlkb (Anonymous) on Sep 22, 2007 11:57 pm (Something There)
Justin's such an ass. And although I can understand him being pissed off at Lauren, it still doesn't excuse him. Still, I like Lauren, so I don't want her to suffer for too long. :( Lol poor things. anywhoo, great chapter. update sooooon!
Liz (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 06:12 pm (Hero to Zero)
Holy SHIT. You know it's an amazing story when it kept popping up in my head all day and i'd get annoyed cause I want Lauren to go back- Justin to fire that stupid ass whore- and the two of them to make babies and live happily ever after.
Author's Response: Thank you so much Liz for thinking it's an amazing story. I'm sorry if it annoyed you, but yeah my character can get annoying at times. Maura La Whora...gotta love the homewrecker lol. And Lauren and Justin baybays....hmmm interesting. And the happily ever after thing...could be a possibility, but I kind of like the drama of them being apart don't you? I'm sorry, I'm just messing...maybe :P Thanks for the review and an update is coming soon. I apologize for my responses....it's close to 2 AM, Justin is on my television screen, and I am delerious with exhaustion. - Amanda
Author's Response: Thank you so much Liz for thinking it's an amazing story. I'm sorry if it annoyed you, but yeah my character can get annoying at times. Maura La Whora...gotta love the homewrecker lol. And Lauren and Justin baybays....hmmm interesting. And the happily ever after thing...could be a possibility, but I kind of like the drama of them being apart don't you? I'm sorry, I'm just messing...maybe :P Thanks for the review and an update is coming soon. I apologize for my responses....it's close to 2 AM, Justin is on my television screen, and I am delerious with exhaustion. - Amanda
ChaseznLuccaLover (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 03:18 pm (Hero to Zero)
Author's Response: No I was kind of muttering it under my breath as she was speeding away. But would you want to go back to a guy who was saying he was sleeping with his employee just to piss you off? And sadly, they are over. And I can't divulge anything about the stuff. You may find out in the future, or Maura can just stick around for the rest of Justin's life...muahaha. - Amanda
NOOOOOOO! GO BACK LAUREN!!!
Is it sad that I was screaming that outloud to my computer screen for the last part of the chapter???
They can't be over. They just can't. Stupid pride. Always gets in their way huh??
I still want to know where the other missing stuff is, and how it disappeared from Maura's closet...
Author's Response: No I was kind of muttering it under my breath as she was speeding away. But would you want to go back to a guy who was saying he was sleeping with his employee just to piss you off? And sadly, they are over. And I can't divulge anything about the stuff. You may find out in the future, or Maura can just stick around for the rest of Justin's life...muahaha. - Amanda
amai84 (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 02:00 pm (Hero to Zero)
Well, that was intense, but so very good.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the chapter and you thought it was intense :) An update is coming soon and thanks for the review! - Amanda
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked the chapter and you thought it was intense :) An update is coming soon and thanks for the review! - Amanda
Vessy (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 01:58 pm (Hero to Zero)
wow, that was really good, I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! More is on the way! - Amanda
Author's Response: Thanks Vessy! More is on the way! - Amanda
mozie (Anonymous) on Sep 22, 2007 01:18 pm (Something There)
AWESOME!!!!!!!!! please update soon I am dying here waiting to see what happens next.
Chelsia (Signed) on Sep 22, 2007 12:24 pm (Hero to Zero)
well geez. the whole time i was reading that i was thinking 'no, no...just calm down...both of you STOP' but alas, it continued to the end....i should just get mad at you but everyone knows how good drama is in a story. but i definitely think maura needs to GO AWAY and justin and lauren need to go find their deserted island and sort this all out
Author's Response: Please don't be mad at me, drama is good for all sorts of stories, including this one! And yeah Maura needs to go away but I don't know if she's going anywhere any time soon. I might be finding a travel agent to see if they can get that desert island for 'em. Don't know if that'll happen since Lauren kind of hates Justin right now. That'd actually be kind of freaking hilarious. Hmm *goes to ponder* - Amanda
Author's Response: Please don't be mad at me, drama is good for all sorts of stories, including this one! And yeah Maura needs to go away but I don't know if she's going anywhere any time soon. I might be finding a travel agent to see if they can get that desert island for 'em. Don't know if that'll happen since Lauren kind of hates Justin right now. That'd actually be kind of freaking hilarious. Hmm *goes to ponder* - Amanda
