Comments For Displaced Deception
Madcrazychick (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 04:29 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
I really hoped that if anyone screwed this up for him that it would have been Maura. But nooo, it had to be Lauren. I figured she was going to end up looking like an idiot on this, but I thought at least the stuff would be there and then Maura would have had some kind of logical explanation as to why it was and then Lauren would look like an idiot. I know you said that Maura was just misunderstood, but she seems all kinds of guilty. And why burst into tears if you know you didn't do anything wrong? Shouldn't she have been like, what the hell are you doing with a key to my place?
*sighs* Well it may have started off as Lauren: 1 Maura: 0, but after this horrible turn of events, it's Lauren :1, Maura: 1,000. And since Lauren isn't going to the party it might even get worse, what with Maura dressed up in her hoochie finest and playing the role of poor me, I'm just the innocent PA who your psycho girlfriend attacked. Wah. lol Update soon, I gotta know what happens next! lol That was a great update by the way.

Author's Response: Well the way I see it, Lauren just kinda lost it in Maura's face and I'm sure she was caught completely by surprised. Add onto the stress of making Justin's Grammy shit run smoothly and other stresses in her life (will be divuldged later), I can see why she'd break down. It honestly wasn't my intention to make Maura seem more guilty by having her burst into tears, her crying is merely her being caught compeltely off guard by Lauren's reaction (remember, she doesn't know how pissed Lauren can get). 

And an update is on the way...I'm trying to balance my schoolwork with writing, but yeah...this is kind of winning lol! - Amanda



Hollie (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 03:50 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
I would dearly love to know how she moved all the stuff in that time.

Author's Response: Hmm isn't that the million dollar question lol. I can't reveal that without giving something else up. Sorry Hollie, can't do it! But I still love you. Now go update Lovelight! lol -Amanda



sofia (Signed) on Sep 18, 2007 03:33 pm (Something There)
I hate Maura... I kind of get the Single White Female' vibe from her. In the begining she never said anything and took credit when Lauren would help her, and now this. She definitely wants Justin, and I don't know how Lauren puts up with her attitude!! This is so good, it actually makes you feel angry to read and know that Justin is taking Maura's side... Like one of those movies where the whole audience can see what's going on but the characters can't.

Awesome job!



JoJo (Anonymous) on Sep 18, 2007 03:09 pm (World's Greatest Criminal Mind)
WHAT HAPPENED TO THE STUFF?!?! can't wait to see what happens next...great update and hope u update soon!

Author's Response: Ask me no questions and I'll tell you no lies! Lol. Update coming soon! Thanks for the review! - Amanda



Hollie (Signed) on Sep 17, 2007 12:18 pm (Chapter 12)
Just an extra review to say I'm glad I'm not the only one who picked up on the "was it Maura's doing or did she swipe credit that wasn't hers" thing.

Author's Response: Yeah glad some people picked up on that. Granted I'm not going to say anyting about it right now lol so you'll just have to wait until later for it to be explained! Love you Hollie babe! - Amanda



Chelsia (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 06:26 pm (Chapter 12)
ok so i let myself have an extended break from my homework and got myself caught up on this story...i love them together SO MUCH. sooo....don't let them fight, k?

oh and three cheers for bringing the story up to canada. us canadians need a bit of justin loving every once in a while :)

Author's Response: Like I said in response to an earlier review, Canada is fun! I enjoy Canada and wish I could go back to visit. It's been a while since I've been there. And I can't make promises about fights lol - Amanda



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 05:37 pm (Chapter 12)

So, as I was reading this chapter I had a total episode of deja vu of deja vu.  if that makes sense.  There's a scene in here that I swear I remember reading before (not saying you've copied, just saying I've had this moment, lol) and as I'm thinking that I've read this before I'm also thinking that I've written a review telling you that this chapter gave me deja vu. 

Whew, that was long and confusing.  I hope you can decipher my crazy ranting.  I loved, LOVED the update :)



Author's Response: Crazy rantings are my favorite....and that feeling of deja vu is probably one of the weirdest things to experience ever. It's happened a handful of times to me and I don't like it at all lol. Thanks for the review and an update is coming up! - Amanda



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 03:16 pm (So this is Love?)
Yes! Canada!  I desperately want things to be OK between her and Justin.

Author's Response: Canada is fun. I went to Vancouver a couple years ago and it was a lot of fun. Yay Canada! Thanks for the review and an update is coming soon! - Amanda



Sassy Spacey (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 01:18 pm (Chapter 12)
Okay, I'm upset he's giving Maura credit for it...lol... she didn't do anything it was Trace and Lauren who decided to come out. Right? Or did I miss something. Anyway, besides that ... I LOVED the chapter and am SO glad that Justin got his b-day wish. I can't wait to see what is to come (as usual) and glad that the updates have been frequent. Anyway, awesome job as usual! ttyl -Traci

Author's Response: The whole 'did Maura get them out to Canada or was it their own doing' might show up in a future chapter. I'm not going to say anything about it right now beacuse its sort of a small spoiler. And yeah, a happy Justin is a happy world and hopefully he can stay happy for a few more chapters. But again, you'll have to wait and see *cackles* I'm glad the updates are frequent as well. Lately I just can't stop writing and that's bad because I have homework to attend to. But I can't help it when the creative juices start to flow! lol Update coming soon, and thanks again Traci! - Amanda



MissTasha (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 10:17 am (Chapter 12)
How cuuuuuuuute. I loved this chapter. Lauren and Justin are so cute and sweet together. After 'Deranged Delusions' and how much of a jerk Justin was in that story I wasn't a huge fan of his character. But this chapter totally changed my mind. And I was really hoping that Lauren would just stay and say screw the hotel job. Oh, well. Please update soon.  

Author's Response: I adored writing this chapter and yeah, it definitely offers a different side to Justin than from what we've seen. And yeah, Lauren should quit, but she's proud and a workaholic and she can't sit still. I think if she did go on tour with Justin it would drive her crazy not being able to do anything. But of course she might go work for him, you'll just have to see how the rest of the chapters play out. Update is coming soon! Thanks again! - Amanda



alimera (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 08:52 am (Chapter 12)
okay, before i say ANYTHING, i must comment on this:

“Thank God, man,” Trace quips as he browses the menu, “she was getting unbearable at home. I know you loosened that pu….” But his words are cut off when there’s a loud thud coming from underneath the table and the condiments, silverware, and mugs for coffee jump a few inches around the table. “OUCH, bitch that hurt!” Trace yelps as he leans forward and rubs what I’m sure is his leg.

i DIED when i read that! i totally had the image of lauren kicking the shit out of trace and the table rattling like that and i died laughing. you did it to me again!!

anyhoo, loved the Beatles reference! and i loved that lauren was able to surprise him and give him a nice birthday. too bad he couldn't cancel everything and spend more time with her though--but she made it out there! that's what counted. hopefully there won't be any more drama--but if there wasn't any drama, there wouldn't be a story for you to write, would there? ugh. haha, update again soon!!

Author's Response: Oh the drama will be around before you realize it, m'dear. I apologize for that, but it has to happen. And yeah I got a good mental picture when I was writing that. Trace kills me sometimes lol. An update is coming soon and thanks for all the love! - Amanda



Hollie (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 07:40 am (Chapter 12)
John lennon references do not have to be apologised for *lol*

Author's Response: Ha. Yeah, the man is legend and probably the most amazing musician in the history of music (sorry Justin). I adore him. I'm actually listening to Imagine right now. Such a beautiful song and so poignant to today. Love you girl! Update is on the way....go get Lovelight updated now! - Amanda



angel_from_africa (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 04:33 am (Chapter 12)
i LOVE this story!! And Justin is so funny!! lol.. keep up the good work!!

Author's Response: Thanks sweetie! Justin is a crackhead lol...I have no idea where his character comes from. I'll keep y'all updated on this story! I'm working on the next chapter right now! - Amanda



Vessy (Signed) on Sep 16, 2007 04:26 am (Chapter 12)
great chapter!

Author's Response: Thanks, as always, Vessy! Update coming soon! - Amanda



danie (Signed) on Sep 15, 2007 11:23 pm (So this is Love?)
i don't care what anybody else says about maura, i don't trust her ass. girls lie, women lie and i know i do alot as hard as i try not to. see lauren should have gotten another guy to be his PA instead, he could have been straight or gay. she wouldn't have to worry about anything happening then.

Author's Response: I can see your point, but the thing is Justin doesn't really like the male PAs. The only one he's been able to stand was Trace and that's mainly because they're BFF and all that stuff. I'm sure if Justin got a guy PA he would be an idiot and think that Trace would take it the wrong way and see it like he was replacing his best friend. Justin really isn't the sharpest pencil in the bag. Again, Maura isn't that bad. Like I said early, just misunderstood. - Amanda





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