Comments For The Sun & The Moon
Whit (Anonymous) on Jan 08, 2011 06:44 pm (Chapter 1)
I am very intrigued! I am excited to read more and see where this is going.

Author's Response:

Hey girly!!

Thank you so much!  There's so much more to unravel!  Justin can be a super complicated, darker man in this fic...but I love a good bad boy!  :)  

I hope you like the new chapter, can't wait to hear what you think!  Thanks for giving this story a chance, too! :)

-BD




azchickadee (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 09:02 am (Chapter 1)
O. M. G.  I....I'm speechless...I am in awe over this first chapter.  First of all:  DAMN can you write!!  This was so amazingly descriptive and heartbreakingly emotional.  I can't even put into words how in awe of you I am right now.  This is the kind of writing I wish I could do but I can't.  Second: when is the next chapter coming because now I'm addicted!  lol...Please don't be nervous about this story.  If this first chapter is any indication it is going to be AMAZING!  <3

Author's Response:

Girly, I heart ya!!!!  You seriously rock my world!  Thank you so much for all the encouragement, advice, and editing!  You're the best!!! 

I am thrilled that you liked it!  I was pretty nervous!  You can totally write this stuff...pffft, you rock!

Anyways, I am sending you an email very shortly with the next chapter! :) Can't wait to hear what you think!!!

-BD




ninabina (Signed) on Jan 08, 2011 06:31 am (Chapter 1)

Your writing style is really unique, and I really enjoy it.  But I'm a little confused--I'm sure intentionally, though.  It seems like this is a vampire thing, but I can't really tell.  It's like you explain it, but always subtly hide what you're saying too.  Or maybe this is all part of his secret.

Either way, can't wait to read more!



Author's Response:

Hey there!!!

I am so excited that you like it! My first review!  eek!  This one is totally different than what I usually write, and I love the challenge.  The prologue is a little chaotic-just glimpses into the words that define how Justin lives his life, what is happening in the future.  Chapter 1 backs things up a bit, developing what you see happening in the Prologue.  Hopefully some answers will be given.  It's not a vamp story, he's totally human, just with some paranormal abilities.  However, it is AU, he's not the Justin from *Nsync or the celebrity...he's a normal guy, navigating the world the way he knows how.  Each piece will be pulled back a layer at a time, so hopefully, I won't lose ya and things will start to make sense more and more.  :)  It's definitely a little darker...but I am a sucker for the bad boy.  :)

 Hope you enjoy, next chapter very soon!  

Thank you again!!!!!!!!!!!!

-BD






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