CutiePie07 (Signed) on Jan 13, 2008 10:08 am (Causing A Scene)
Justin's a dumbass. lol. It wasn't really confusing, just fast paced. But more happily, you updated! :) When is Julie's friend going to meet Justin? I guess thats coming up, right? Can't wait till you update again.

Author's Response: Yep, the meeting is going to happen very, very soon. Next chapter soon.



Kahlymilla (Signed) on Jan 12, 2008 10:03 pm (Causing A Scene)
I don't think I was that confused even though in generally I'm usually confused anyway lol. Um...that was a good chapter Ange. Justin confuses me, but I think he confuses himself even more. Where did he come up with the bright idea to propose to Cameron? I don't think he even thought it through really. I didn't really hate Jules in this chapter so that is a plus lol. I kind of like the relationship between Chris and the narrator in this chapter, it was funny and playful, but maybe they are better just as friends instead. It was nice of her to pick him up from Jail, why was he that wasted in the first place though lmao. Frankie is probably the smartest character in this story thus far lol. Can't wait until the narrator and Justin meet!! Do you have that scene planned already?

Author's Response: lol Not really hating her is almost like liking her. Maybe next chapter she'll be likeable? Or not, who knows. lol why was he that wasted in the first place though lmao. Does a college student really need a reason to get drunk? lol I don't have it planned. I did, but I've changed it. I liked it the old way, but the one person I let read it wasn't that fond of it, so hence the changing. That scene is going kill me.



c00lxkiddo (Signed) on Jan 12, 2008 09:32 pm (Causing A Scene)

I think I got it, but I'm still a little confused.

Justin proposed, even though he just had sex with Julie.  Chris and the narrator (did you mention her name & I missed it, 'cause I feel really bad that I don't remember her name) are rebuilding their friendship, but it's more like a new relationship.  Am I right?  Either way, I enjoyed it. [:



Author's Response: Yep, you're right. And I didn't mention her name, so you didn't miss it. And there was a semi-good reason for not mentioning it in the story thus far, but that was before I re-worked the ending, (which I'm still re-working lol) so maybe in the end it will be stupid that I didn't have her name mentioned sooner. But anyways, hopefully having those thoughts confirmed takes away any lingering confusion, if not let me know! Thanks for reading/reviewing!





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