Nikka (Anonymous) on Feb 11, 2014 09:04 pm (Chapter 1)
This is a great story.  I can see why it was nominated for so many awards. It's very emotional reading. You get in depth. I'll be a voice of dissent, I really like Jenna but I hope they stay friends.  Sometimes that's even more important and more intimate than romance. JC needs good friends. Besides it would bea different avenue to explore.  Either way, keep up the great work.


daysgoby (Signed) on Oct 23, 2013 10:25 pm (Chapter 1)
This is one of my favorite stories right now. Love how you pretray Jc. His inner self is funny. I hope him and Jenna get together. Hope you update soon. Great story! 


daysgoby (Signed) on Jul 14, 2013 10:32 am (Chapter 1)
Love this story! Can't wait for more. 


theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 08, 2013 09:21 pm (Chapter 1)

Aww Jenna sounds so nice, I''m glad that she's there with him. :) Together for a quick lunch.

Now, I also like how Dr. Franklin explains what was wrong with JC, he seems nice and understanding, and I hope that he would do his best in curing him.

I'm liking this so far, thanks for the update..



Author's Response: Thank you! I did some research into the problem for accuracy. I didn't want to spew out any old information. Yes, Dr. Franklin will be vital role in the treatment. As finnicky as JC is with needles and such, he needs someone who will keep him calm.


Musiccrazedjazzy (Anonymous) on Oct 05, 2012 05:32 pm (Chapter 1)
I hate these type of conversations. Where all you want is someone to understand you and yet Eric being the dimwit he is does nothing. Love it can't wait for the next chapter.


Megan (Anonymous) on Sep 22, 2012 09:37 pm (Chapter 1)
I love this story so far :). I liked reading about JC's inner battle with himself to just get outta bed, I myself have struggled with depression over the past 10 years so I can relate to whats going on. Great story! Keep it up!!


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 21, 2012 03:34 pm (Chapter 1)
Thanks for explaining that. Ignore what I said earlier. I honestly don't know how you deal with your depression or how you feel, but I am glad you made this a story that helps us understand this I can't say illness and I can't say disease but either way its great that you are writing about it. I'm excited to see what's next.


roseinvisible (Signed) on Sep 20, 2012 06:30 pm (Chapter 1)

It's been so long since I've read something worth continuing..

I'm glad I came across this.



Author's Response: Thank you! I'm floored. You made my night :) 


Anonymous (Anonymous) on Sep 18, 2012 11:43 am (Chapter 1)
This is interesting, however it seems as if you're giving him a multiple personality disorder. It kind of confused me a bit when he was beating himself up. Other than that I'm curious as to where this is going.

Author's Response: Thank you for reading!  What makes you think that? I'm basing it off my own battle with clinical depression. My style is to show thoughts in italics. I'm sorry for confusing you. I hope you continue reading. 


theusagirl (Signed) on Sep 17, 2012 09:15 pm (Chapter 1)

This is SO GOOD! This story has me hooked already, I would LOVE to see how this goes.. :D

Looking forward to the next chapter.. *thumbs up*



Author's Response:

Thank you :) I'm glad you like it. I'm trying to iron on some more details. hopefully I'll update soon.  



mixed-bag-of-tricks (Anonymous) on Sep 17, 2012 05:57 pm (Chapter 1)
I really like your story so far. I'm intrigued. I can't wait until the next chapter and the rest of the story. Jenna reminds me of something I have thought about before.

Author's Response: Thank you :) I decided to play on that concept a little bit and see how it affects the dynammic. 




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