musiccrazedjazzy (Signed) on May 28, 2013 10:02 pm (Chapter 11)
ok I need a tissue after reading that. I love this story. I can't wait to read more. I love that his family is there for him. :D



creativechaos (Signed) on May 24, 2013 03:19 pm (Chapter 11)
I finally got a chance to read what you had so far. Please keep going; with everything I've experienced and am still experiencing, now I'm emotionally attached to the story. You've done a fabulous job so far - I love it.

Author's Response: Thank you, Tish! My goal has been to make it seem realistic and I'm glad you think so. It feels good to know I'm helping someone else in the proccess of writing this. I have a good bit of the plot outlined. The only way this story won't get written is that life gets too busy. But I love writing it. I don't see myself not completeing this story.



mollyanna5 (Anonymous) on May 23, 2013 11:24 pm (Chapter 11)
thanks for the update! I can't wait to see how he is when he wakes up!

Author's Response: Thank you, Molly :) He'll have trouble communicating with people. He'll have to think out of the box for awhile.



theusagirl (Signed) on May 22, 2013 08:39 pm (Chapter 11)

Ok, from the top, I like these lines here: "He liked those intimate moments, just him and his voice. And that carried over into adulthood. He enjoyed getting to know a song’s intricacies privately before sharing it with the world. Tunes sometimes stayed in his head for days before he wrote them down. His voice was an integral part of writing songs, which in turn carried him through difficult phases. That is very true, sometimes he just pops out of nowhere and surprises us. :)

Now, the thought of JC undergoing surgery and saying he was scared is sad. :( I'm glad that all of his friends are family are there. I know he's gonna pull through this.. :)

Update soon! I must know what happens next..



Author's Response: Thank you, Steph :) I love how you tell me what parts you like. I like that little piece, too. It's how I feel while writing the story. I enjoy getting to know the plot and the characters before I share it with you all. I'm so happy you're enjoying it as much as I am.



DiamondDoss (Signed) on May 21, 2013 11:14 pm (Chapter 11)
OH wow, Kristen. Great job, girl! So glad you updated and I hope you can keep your muses going. I bawled at the first when JC was going through his feelings and then when the 4 lackeys were there in the waiting room. :) More please.

Author's Response: I'm writing as fast as I can ;P I don't plan to stop writing this anytime soon. :) Aww, I'm glad you liked the guys waiting there. They meant it when they said they'd be there for him.





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