Unicornmaiden13 (Signed) on Jul 27, 2014 07:45 pm (Chapter 14)
The haircut and the following talk with Lance were very nicely done. I've gained a great deal of sympathy for people with cancer; my uncle had it, my mom had it, my mom's cousin had it (and died), my grandma had it, and my aunt just barely recovered from it. Makes me wonder if I might get it myself one day, which is an awful thought.


theusagirl (Signed) on Aug 08, 2013 01:29 pm (Chapter 14)

Oh no he shaved his hair... :( But its fiction, and I like that Devon was a good sport about it, I like that about him.

And the thought of Lance crying is sad.

I also like the fact that Jenna is concerned about him, but I can see that JC wants something more, and his mind is letting him think things, but I think they should continue just being friends for now.. :)

This was a pretty good chapter, thanks for the update..



Musiccrazedjazzy (Anonymous) on Aug 07, 2013 03:37 pm (Chapter 14)
Ok where's a tissue when I need it? That killed me.


mollyanna5 (Signed) on Aug 06, 2013 10:19 pm (Chapter 14)
I loved the haircut scene, so touching between Lance and JC. Great job showing emotions in your writing. Thank you for updating :)




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