theusagirl (Signed) on Jan 02, 2014 09:14 pm (Chapter 17)

Tell him Matt, what a good friend he is, I like that he reads him so well.

And things may be sparking b/tween JC and Jenna.

Though in the earlier scene, Karen shouldn't have been so judgemental about him seeing Jenna and hanging out with her. She seems like a nice girl and won't be another Bobbi or Eva or that recent one he had..

But anyways, only time would tell.

I like these lines here: "It’s not a Mercedes, but it gets me from point A to point B.” She inserted her key into the side lock.

“That is old school. Having to unlock the doors by hand.”

Thats right! I still unlock my car by hand, and its awesome, I don't need a new car right now, there's always gonna be one after the other.. I like my car.

Oh and I think you did a mixup about the different cars that Jenna drove, it went from a Buick to a Chevy, its a magic car! LOL

Above all, nicely done. *reads next one*






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