Tell him Matt, what a good friend he is, I like that he reads him so well.
And things may be sparking b/tween JC and Jenna.
Though in the earlier scene, Karen shouldn't have been so judgemental about him seeing Jenna and hanging out with her. She seems like a nice girl and won't be another Bobbi or Eva or that recent one he had..
But anyways, only time would tell.
I like these lines here: "It’s not a Mercedes, but it gets me from point A to point B.” She inserted her key into the side lock.
“That is old school. Having to unlock the doors by hand.”
Thats right! I still unlock my car by hand, and its awesome, I don't need a new car right now, there's always gonna be one after the other.. I like my car.
Oh and I think you did a mixup about the different cars that Jenna drove, it went from a Buick to a Chevy, its a magic car! LOL
Above all, nicely done. *reads next one*