You're on a roll, mate. You're an awesome writer and the emotions in this are very tangible.
If you're interested, I have a story about one of the guys going through cancer, too. It's called Fading Sun and this time Joey is the primary focus.
I hate Eva..I hate that b*tch.... *grumbles*
Anyways, I hope Jenna returns JC's call..I think both of them are going through some emotional probs, maybe Jenna is having problems with her boss?? Hmm..
And JC needs to control his temper, I know he's going through alot crap now, but I DO hope there's a silver lining for all of this.. :)
Good update!
WHO?! Ok! Who is Derek, if that slimeball is making Jenna do things to make JC hurt, then he's gonna have to deal with me.. *balls fist*
*SIGH* But why did JC's mass tumor remain the same after surgery?? WHY?? :( I hope things comes good in the end..
But thank you for updating, its been a good while..I'll be looking forward to the next update..
*sings* "I Know There's Something Going On..by Frida, yeah typical 80s song..
These lines here:
She sighed again. “I don't need anything in return”
"You do. You're just too stubborn to admit it because you don't want to have your heart ripped out of your chest."
Wow JC, you really know how to tell her don't ya??
Though this chapter was a bit sad, but don't worry, didn't make me cry...yet.
Looking good so far, thanks for the update..
No woman in Hollywood would do what she’s done for me
Wow..I wish JC would actually move out of Hollywood and date somebody from a neighboring town.. ;) But thats another story..
Now, JC's feelings are getting much stronger for Jenna, and I think Jenna knows it, but the relationship could be complicated cause of his illness.. :( This is tough.
And Karen likes Jenna now, I guess she had a change of heart.. :)
Both chapters were good, thanks for the update...
Tell him Matt, what a good friend he is, I like that he reads him so well.
And things may be sparking b/tween JC and Jenna.
Though in the earlier scene, Karen shouldn't have been so judgemental about him seeing Jenna and hanging out with her. She seems like a nice girl and won't be another Bobbi or Eva or that recent one he had..
But anyways, only time would tell.
I like these lines here: "It’s not a Mercedes, but it gets me from point A to point B.” She inserted her key into the side lock.
“That is old school. Having to unlock the doors by hand.”
Thats right! I still unlock my car by hand, and its awesome, I don't need a new car right now, there's always gonna be one after the other.. I like my car.
Oh and I think you did a mixup about the different cars that Jenna drove, it went from a Buick to a Chevy, its a magic car! LOL
Above all, nicely done. *reads next one*
It would be an awful world without Jc's sweet voice. Teared up reading his journal entry.
I hope Jenna doesn't have a boyfriend. They seem so sweet together. I agree he should have kissed her. Lol
Great chapter was so excited seeing it was updated. Looking forward to more. :)
