Wowsers, that was scary and thrilling. I could picture the whole scene very vividly. Now I think it's safe to say that Dan's a certified jerk.
I love how Chris was able to break the whole thing up in two seconds flat and how he cared for Libby afterwards. I've got mixed feelings about Justin's behavior; it's cool that he was able to knock Dan down a peg or two, but he didn't go about it the best way, either.
Author's Response: Dan is definitely a jerk, and it was fun having him get his rewards, but yes, Justin is young and has so much to learn. Glad you liked it, and I thought you'd like Chris being the hero!