"He probably wants to bang it out again." Loved it!
Great update. I really liked the interaction between the guys, it feels genuine and realistic. I also like that Casey is a little complicated and not straight out "I needed you to rescue me" type of girl.
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
jazz is a witty girl! LOL
i really appreciate your feedback. i'm always nervous about writing group interaction because they *are* real people and I want to at least somewhat make the dialogue seem somewhat authentic. as for Casey...complicated is a good way to describe her. a little TOO complicated, maybe. :-)
So I just read all three chapters, and I still need more. I am extremely hooked. I'm really interested in Casey's backstory, and can't wait to see how more of it is revealed. Great writing.
Author's Response: thank you so very much for the feedback! i'm slowly but surely editing and proofreeding so hopefully it won't take me too long to get all of the story up. i hope you continue to enjoy it!
