So yeah, I shouldn't have read this chapter for two reasons. One, I should be writing an update for my own story. Two, reading well written fiction like this makes me all the more insecure about my own schtick. HA! I like this story, you feel the palpable energy between the two of them. I really shouldn't...but onto the next chapter. ;)

Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! I'm blushing. You have a fantastic story so no need for insecurity. :-D

Thanks for reading and for the encouragement!  

Great start! Hope you post more soon!

Author's Response: thank you! I will soon!