AceofSpades (Anonymous) on Mar 13, 2015 04:15 pm (Chapter 10)

Don't know how I missed this, but lovely chapter. Well, the argument was lovely, but I really could feel how Gem and Maggie were both feeling. Maggie was kind of harsh, but what she said is true.

Great chapter.



Author's Response: Thank you. I wasn't 100% convinced the argument was in the right place, but the dialogue wouldn't get out of my head so I'm going with it. Thanks for your support. :)



DiamondDoss (Signed) on Mar 10, 2015 06:06 pm (Chapter 10)
I am so sorry this was hard to write, especially after a falling out with a friend. That always brings out more emotions...But I must say, bravo. You know just where to go to make the reader want more and to see what's next in all facets of the story.

Author's Response: Awww thanks so much. X





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