LadyX (Signed) on Jun 01, 2015 07:29 pm (Chapter 1)
Sooo...you totally piqued my interest. Incredible writing. I really like how you tied in the song in your title and the story. I can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind words. I'm very flattered.  I hope you enjoy the remaining chapters as much.  :)


Pumples (Signed) on May 30, 2015 10:50 am (Chapter 1)

Welcome to the archive! I'm so glad you posted and have jumped straight into a challenge!

Great start to your story. I hope these two can work through their problems as they must've been pretty happy together to have been contemplating marriage. I wonder what happened to make it all fall apart. Can't wait to find out!



Author's Response: Thank you for the welcome and for the sweet review.  I'm about to update, so I hope the story holds your interest until the end.  :)


kopfkinokate (Signed) on May 29, 2015 07:03 am (Chapter 1)
Wow! What a great start. I am glad you join in on us... Please keep writing. I can't wait to see how this turns out! Very cool story so far... !! :)

Author's Response: This story has 9 chapters and I will be updating throughout the day. I'm so happy you liked what you've already read.  :)


elle-miranda (Signed) on May 28, 2015 11:28 pm (Chapter 1)
yay! i'm so glad you posted!! welcome to the archive; we're glad you're here!

Author's Response: The responses have been favorable.  Thank you so very much!  I'm glad I'm here, too! :)


Anonymous (Anonymous) on May 28, 2015 09:35 pm (Chapter 1)
Love it! Please keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you.  I will be updating this story throughout the day.  There are 9 chapters in all.




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