Comments For Spoiled
lostinadreamx (Signed) on Dec 30, 2007 10:13 pm (A Tour Souvenir)
Ok.... SHES PREGNANT? I guess I must be a little slow cuz I didn't see that coming : lol but thats a good thing for you as a writer! a big twist. *sighs* i hope justin gets his shit together... okay on to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Yes Kiki is pregnant with a little Timberlake. It wasn't as much of a twist as it was a trick because I did leave clues. I was just being a little sneak and made them very subtle. Go back and see if you can find them. Feel free to email me if you think you figured it out right (that offer stands for anyone who wants to know). Here's a hint: Both clues are in Chapter 18.... Alast Justin is a special case. Like I said he's got some demons that have a tight hold on him and its going to take a very big rude awakening to get him on the straight and narrow. Thanks girl for the feedback.
Author's Response: Yes Kiki is pregnant with a little Timberlake. It wasn't as much of a twist as it was a trick because I did leave clues. I was just being a little sneak and made them very subtle. Go back and see if you can find them. Feel free to email me if you think you figured it out right (that offer stands for anyone who wants to know). Here's a hint: Both clues are in Chapter 18.... Alast Justin is a special case. Like I said he's got some demons that have a tight hold on him and its going to take a very big rude awakening to get him on the straight and narrow. Thanks girl for the feedback.
a_moments_grace (Signed) on Dec 30, 2007 06:54 pm (A Tour Souvenir)
So I just had a chance to catch up on all your updates...and...whew! Holy crap Girl! this is intense!...please tell me that you're going to make Justin grovel and make it up to Kiki...the two of them just have to be together. It's not right if they're not!
Author's Response: I know I think those two crazy kids belong together too. Let's just hope that Justin can get his head straight so they can get back to each other.
Author's Response: I know I think those two crazy kids belong together too. Let's just hope that Justin can get his head straight so they can get back to each other.
watchoutforthecar (Signed) on Dec 30, 2007 02:52 pm (A Tour Souvenir)
Author's Response: Yes it did cut off. Damnit. Okay I'm going to go fix it and then you can read the rest. Thanks for the heads up!
Great chapter! Did it cut off though.. since there is a left over "The"?
Anyhoo, good job =] Love this story.
Author's Response: Yes it did cut off. Damnit. Okay I'm going to go fix it and then you can read the rest. Thanks for the heads up!
Boo_Berry_Crunch (Signed) on Dec 30, 2007 02:33 pm (A Tour Souvenir)
Justin SHOULD feel horrible!! What he did to Kiki was fucked up.
Author's Response: Let's not forget about the baby. What he's done to both of them is jacked up. And he does feel bad about it actually. The chapter got cut off so I think you missed Justin's take on the whole situation. Read the next part and you'll see. Thanks for the review!
Author's Response: Let's not forget about the baby. What he's done to both of them is jacked up. And he does feel bad about it actually. The chapter got cut off so I think you missed Justin's take on the whole situation. Read the next part and you'll see. Thanks for the review!
