Author's Response: Josh and Reva are one of the great soap couples....Anywhoo, Justin is a mess point blank and everything that could get him to cooperate had been done. The ball is in his court now. I'm glad you're enjoying the story and thank you for your review.
Author's Response: Lynn definitely gave it to him and Justin is not her little golden boy anymore. She's got the next extension of herself to care for especially in his absence. She'll never abandon her son, but he is not her only primary concern anymore.
All I can say is, "WOW!" What a wonderful story! I read up until this last chapter, and I am blown away by your writing. You really know how to write angst.
After reading to this point, I'm so angry with Justin's character, I'm not sure if I want to see Kiki and him get back together. I mean what a typical deadbeat! Here Kiki is pregnant getting ready to raise another human being on her own...and Justin is just going about his merry way. Sure, when confronted he's ashamed..but he's really not getting it. He has a little pitty party, and then he just moves on along with his new girlfriend, and his party.
I really hope that at some point this all hits him and he feels regret full throttle...and boy do I hope it's rubbed in his face! lol See how your writing has got me all riled up? ;)
Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I'm glad my story's getting such a reaction out of you, it was supposed to. I, myself was pissed at Justin as I was writing the last chapter lol. And thanks for the compliment on my writing style because English was my least favorite subject and I sucked at it. I was afraid that I wasn't getting my point across clearly but your insight on Justin is dead on. He doesn't get it at all that he's still causing potential damage to his child by not being there at all. He's being very selfish and cowardly about his responsibilities as a father and his reasons are inexcusable. It's going to come back and bite him in the ass one day if he doesn't suck it up and be a man. Thanks for your review!
Author's Response: Justin definitely needs some sense knocked into him. Lynn tried, but it didn't work so something's gonna have to give and eventually it will. "What goes around, comes around".....
Okay… Lynn’s kind of a bitch. Lol. She has her son up on this high pedestal and she’d rather believe chickens are flying then Justin doing anything wrong. GRR! It’s aggravating! But atleast the truth FINALLY came out, and thank heavens that Lynn put Justin in his place. Poor Kiki.
Author's Response: Lynn is kind of in denial when it come to Justin. She knows he's no angel, but in the past she pretty much turned a blind eye to it. Now there's someone more important, a child, paying for his wrong doings. In this instance she's not going to stand by and ignore his less than favorable attributes. Oh and don't worry about Kiki - she's a survivor. I love reading your take on the storyline and the characters. Thank you so much for your constant support of my story. U rock! LoL :)
