Comments For Spoiled
champ (Signed) on Feb 27, 2008 04:26 pm (20 Months)
great update...keep the chapters coming...hope you don't take long updating....lol you leave your chapters in suspense for next time too much...lmao


Author's Response: Don't worry I won't take too long with this next update. There's too much suspence involved this time for me to leave you guys hangin' like that. Next update it on its way. Thanx 4 the R&R!



Gigi (Signed) on Feb 25, 2008 08:00 pm (20 Months)
WHAT IS WITH THAT ENDING!!!!  You better update and soon!!!!

Author's Response: I know, but I had to do a cliffy for this chapter. The next one is when like I said: everything changes - so stay tuned! Thanx for your review!



DaniD (Signed) on Feb 25, 2008 06:36 pm (20 Months)

You have done a great job going through the first year and a half for Cheyanne and Kiki. That is a happy healthy little girl, who is loved by everyone that comes into contact with her. Kiki has dedicated her life to making that happen. I also noticed the lack of love life for Kiki..I suppose that is not a priority for her right now..but still feel bad for her. She has one serious relationship that is over before it can begin, and she gets burned.

I can't feel bad for Justin..no matter how much he seems to be suffering. The fact that he is in pain is the only thing that makes his character tolerable at this point. I am literally on the edge of my seat  to see how this is all going to change.. PLEASE don't let it involve Kiki dying though...*puppy dog eyes* You wouldn't do that though..Right? lol

Happy to see an update!  It was wonderful as always. Can't wait for the next!

Dani



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter. I was worried it would be too boring, being a filler and all. Now on to Kiki and her love life which is the last thing she's concerned about for two reason. One - she's focused on giving Cheyenne a stable home and a healthy childhood. Two - like you siad she's been burned, for the second time, this time worse and she doesn't want to go through that again. But just because I didn't mention it in this chapter does it mean Kiki didn't date during those 20 months. ;) I too feel bad for Justin, but its more in a piteous way because he's making his own life hell. Would I kill Kiki? Hmm? I don't know. I guess you're going to have to sit on that edge for a little bit longer. Tehehe :) Thanx 4 reviewing Dani!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Feb 25, 2008 03:36 pm (20 Months)
what happened...did Justin get his head outta his ass yet? Is he finally gonna see Kiki and CJ? what what what!!!!!

Author's Response: Yes and yes, but how *shrug my shoulders* I don't know. Wait and see. :) Thanx 4 the R&R!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Feb 25, 2008 01:34 pm (20 Months)
Well I hope he comes to his senses soon!! That little girl needs a Daddy, and that pop star needs a little girl :)

Author's Response: He most certainly does need Cheyenne and that is something he didn't consider when he initially decided to walk away. Now its eating him alive, feeling her absence from his life. Those senses of his will be coming back soon and maybe even painfully. Thanx for reviewing!



LaLa (Signed) on Feb 25, 2008 12:17 pm (20 Months)
More please? I hope Justin gets his head out of his ass :/

Author's Response: More is on its way and Justin is definitely about to get his shit together. Thanx 4 the review! :)



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Feb 25, 2008 11:24 am (20 Months)
aww, that's so sad. I wish Justin would just swallow his pride. I love this.

Author's Response: I can tell you that you're wish will be coming soon next chapter. Thanx 4 reviewing!



izzy04 (Anonymous) on Feb 25, 2008 09:42 am (20 Months)

that was sooo good. I kind of feel bad for justin but really its his own falt as to why heis not involved in his daughters life and I hope he will grow some huge  balls soon before its too late.



Author's Response: Justin is his own worse enemy here, but he's about to come face to face with the problem's he's created for himself. So keep your eyes open for the next update. Thanx 4 your review!





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