Hopefully this crisis would be over with soon and none of them would have to sit back and watch an important part of all their life fade away.
That line just GOT me. OMG that was so sad girl. I hope she's alright. Leukemia... GOD. I was not expecting that... that poor little girl. I really just wanted to cry.
And I can't stand Cameron. lol She just sounds so nasal and annoying in my head lol.
Justin had better not be an asshole again or he's going to deserve a major smack across the face. I'm so addicted to this story. You throw in all these twists that I'm not expecting at all. Update soon!!
Author's Response: Hey I gotta keep you on your toes with my twists and turns, right? ;) LoL. This was defeinitely an emotional chapter for me as well, but everything will work out in the end. And part of that will not involve Justin backsliding. He has seen the light, plus Kiki's not about to let that happen, at least without doing some bodily harm to him first lol. Now Ms. Diaz, well there was a little selfishness coloring her response to Justin having a child, but she might as well get used to sharing him because Cheyenne not going anywhere and she's just been bumped down Justin's priority list. Thanx for reviewing Jeannie and I'll be feeding your addiction soon! LoL.
Author's Response: Justin has had himself a very rude awakening and now he is ready to do what's right for Cheyenne. Say bye bye to dumbass Justin. Thanx for your review!
Author's Response: I can tell you this: It happens everyday, but I don't think its right for parents to have to bury their child....Thanx for the R&R!
Author's Response: Thanx! I'm glad you like it. The next one is in production already.
Author's Response: Thanx 4 the review! And as far as the next chapter goes.. :)
Crying is not the best way to start out your day..but that's how it started for me. This chapter was so heart wrentching. You made us fall in love with Cheyenne last chapter, and now this sweet beautiful little baby could die. That's actually worse than Kiki dying.
Ok..now I feel sorry for Justin..against my will. Well, your right I pity him. A sick child supercedes everything else..and makes hard feelings and isecurities fall to the wayside. I'm just glad that Justin immediately reconized that he had screwed up. That he could lose his child.
At this point I'm just going to patiently wait for the next update, and hope that it brings good news for little Cheyenne. I won't even comment on the underlying stuff that has got to be going on between Justin and Kiki. Later for that.
The update was..Wow.
Dani
Author's Response: I know it was a sad one, but I had to bring in the drama somewhere and what's more dramatic and emotional than a child in crisis. Plus it the kind of situation that brings everyone together and cuts out all the BS that was keeping them apart. But the drama doesn't stop here, like you said there's "underlying stuff" between Justin and Kiki that still needs to be addressed. For now though, Justin's eyes are wide open now and he's finally going to man up for both his self and Cheyenne. Thanx for the feedback Dani!
I hope they all pull through this. I'm glad Justin's back, and I want things to be right with all of them again :)
Author's Response: Its going to be a long road, but things should pan out well for the whole gang. Thanx for reviewing!
Author's Response: Yeah it was depressing writing that chapter especially when I played the song while doing it. Thanx for the R&R!
