Comments For Spoiled
MissM69 (Signed) on Mar 19, 2008 11:26 pm (Second Chances)

YAY!! now I know things will be ok :D

Great chapter can't wait for the next update ^^



Author's Response: Things are going to be better now, but there is still adult drama on the horizon. Can't wait for the next update you say. Well you don't have to....Thanx 4 reviewing!



SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Mar 19, 2008 09:19 pm (Second Chances)

THank YOU!!!! PIXIE IS GONNA BE OKAY!!!!!!



Author's Response: Of course she was. Cheyenne's like her mother, she's a tough girl and she's not going to let this bring her down. Thanx for your review!



LaLa (Signed) on Mar 19, 2008 08:05 pm (Second Chances)
i was happy to see an update. can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Well then here's more.... Thanx for the R&R!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Mar 19, 2008 08:03 pm (Second Chances)
I'm glad that he's working on fixing everything. I love this, PMS.

Author's Response: Yes Justin has seen the light and is walking towards it lol. Thanx for reviewing!



DaniD (Signed) on Mar 19, 2008 07:57 pm (Second Chances)

Well...That was a relief. Justin is a match..and by stepping up and saving his daughters life and sticking around..he may just be able to redeem hisself.

I LOVE the description of Cheyenne..Though she is a bit younger than the actress..her spirit reminds me of that adorable little girl that starred in that Disney movie "The Game Plan" for some reason..I just invision her like that. :)

Kiki..All I can say is that Justin is extremely fortunate that she is the type of person that puts the well being of her child before all else. She is able to set aside animosity..I understand why Justin should be allowed to take his rightful place in Cheyenne's life..it's best for her that she has her Daddy.

I know it's a distant secondary thing at the moment..but I hope that it is slammed home time and time again how terribly Justin hurt KIKI. He walked away from something great, and I want to see some reckoning for that..eventually. I can't help but resent his relationship with Cameron. He walked away from Kiki because what...he was falling in love? Why the hell is it ok to love Cameron?! If you were to bring them together again..I want him to have to work for it...HARD. lol 

Alright luv..I'm done. Brilliant update..as always ;p



Author's Response: Haven't seen "The Game Plan" (I need to 'cause my other man - Dwayne Johnson - is in it looking all kinds of good lol), but from the previews I know the little girl you're talking about. She is adorable and yeah I would say Cheyenne has a personality like hers. Cute and percocious. Yes Justin is very lucky Kiki is such a good mother. She can put her own feelings towards him on the back burner (Side note: Justin and Kiki's past relationship WILL be addressed. Justin has not redeemed himself yet for that bretrayal in no way shape or form.) for the greater good, her child. Now when did I say Justin loved Cameron? ;) Thanx so much Dani for all the support you've been giving my story. rn



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Mar 19, 2008 04:02 pm (Second Chances)
Oh good.  I was hoping for some good news :)

Author's Response: Of course the news would be good. Cheyenne's not going anywhere anytime soon. Thanx for the review!



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Mar 19, 2008 02:20 pm (Second Chances)

lol i used the little girl from enough for one of my stories. lol shes an adorable little girl. good choice. she has an adorable voice.

Anyway, i really think that Justin is working hard to redeem himself. He put it best by saying that he was, "really was pretty frickin' shady" lol. He needs to work hard to gain everyone's trust and hopefully he's on the right track. Now, all he needs to do is get rid of Cameron... lol. Love the story girl!



Author's Response: I know I saw that in the video for Passion and I was like "well I guess great mind's think alike" ;) lol. Plus my little cousin has a voice like that and its like the cutest thing ever when she talks. I just thought the little girl I used for Cheyenne and that voice fit perfectly together.rnrnI'm so glad you think Justin is redeeming himself. He may not have just woke up one day and said, "I'm going to be a better person from now on." He had to be scared straight. He could have easily come to the hospital and given his donation and walk out again. But he's seeing this situation for what it is and taking advantage of the second chance(s) he has. Now as for Cameron well....you'll just have to wait and see :P You love my story, I love your reviews. Thanx girl!





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