Comments For Spoiled
champ (Signed) on Mar 31, 2008 02:25 pm (Blue Meets Blue)
hope you update soon!! really liking the story hope looking forward to continue reading the story...


Author's Response: Oh it will definitely continue. LoL, I'm actually working on the next chapter right now, but its still pretty scrambled. It might be awhile before its ready to be posted, but its on the way! Thanx 4 reviewing!



SJane (Signed) on Mar 25, 2008 07:17 am (Blue Meets Blue)
such a beautiful story girl and great for your first

Author's Response: Aww thank you. I'm glad you're like it. :)



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Mar 21, 2008 01:17 pm (Blue Meets Blue)

okay so im a spazz and didn't realize that you updated this twice. :D you made me weekend lol., thanks haha

 omg the meeting with cheyenne and justin was so good. that little girl gives him the strength to be a better person. now if only he and kiki would work things out... :( dont make me sad girl! lol make it happen!

oh and Happy bday grandma! lol



Author's Response: You're welcome for the double dose....Cheyenne is strength for Justin. He understands now and is willing to be the best father to her, that including changing his ways - becoming selfless and being more loyal to the people who have always been by his side. He's becoming the person that he used to be, the person that Kiki fell in love with *hint, hint*, but will Kiki be responsive to the old Justin? Will she give him a second chance, that's if he even wants one. A lot of issues still need to be resolved between them and there's no telling how that will go down. At least for now ;) And it was a very happy birthday for my Grandma, she had a great time at her birthday dinner. Thanx a bunch for another awesome review. You rock girl!



DaniD (Signed) on Mar 20, 2008 10:27 am (Blue Meets Blue)

It's a true testament to how good this story is when I feel like it's my birthday come early because of a double update! LOL

Very touching moment..First Kiki getting to hold Cheyenne for the first time since she had been hospitalized..and then Justin getting to hold her for the first time..well..ever. I'm glad that Cheyenne's eyes are the same color as Justin's. Just one more thing to drive home to Justin what a fool he had been to turn his back on his own flesh and blood. Sounds like he's getting it now though.

I'll hold you to the promise that Justin will make amends to Kiki eventually too. Ok..Ok..so he doesn't love Cameron..that just means he ran from Kiki like a little bitch boy. I hope he learns to man up! lol ;D

Ooo..Dwayne Johnson...*stares off dreamily* Yeah..he's yummy :P



Author's Response: Well then happy pre-birthay LoL. Cheyenne has a few traits - personaility and physical - that her father also has and it does play a part in making Justin see the small connection he already has with his daughter. Now Justin has manned up with one woman in his life, but he's got to get things straight with a couple more. Will it come down to Cameron or Kiki for Justin? He might have to make some decisions, but then again Kiki might make them for him. She may be willing to give him a second chance with Cheyenne, but not with her. Hmm who knows what's going to happen there. LoL ;) Yummy is right, imagine my excitement when I found out about the cast of Southland Tales - a two for one special lol. I might have to get that movie no matter how wacked it is. Thanx for the review Dani! :D



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Mar 20, 2008 07:50 am (Blue Meets Blue)
Awwwww!!! that was so adorable!  I'm glad she's taken so well to him :)  Ohhh...I hope things keep getting better.

Author's Response: Justin is very lucky Cheyenne was so open with him. She could have easily shied away from him. That wasn't a get out of free card for Justin though, he still has some work to do to earn her complete ease with him. Thanx for reviewing!





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