Comments For Spoiled
SweetTeaPi16 (Signed) on Apr 20, 2008 02:03 pm (Good Morning!)
hahaha.....Kiki is funny

Author's Response: Kiki is quite the character. Thanx for reviewing!



a_moments_grace (Signed) on Apr 18, 2008 07:29 am (Good Morning!)
I'm glad that they're getting along so well.  They make a cute family :)

Author's Response: They do, don't they? But how much of a family are they going to become? *hint, hint* ;) Thanx for the R&R!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Apr 17, 2008 11:45 pm (Good Morning!)
I'm glad that things are getting better and pixie has seemed to accept her daddy to a degree. I love this, PMS.

Author's Response: Yeah slowly, but surely Cheyenne and Justin are building a relationship and its only going to get better and stronger. The three of them are connecting, but they still have to get pass this major hurdle of her leukemia. Thanx for reviewing!



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Apr 17, 2008 11:11 pm (Good Morning!)

lol, I'm brokebacklance on JJB and believe me, I LOVE this story. It's absolutely amazing. I freak out everytime its updated lol. It's the dorkiness in me. Anyway, you rock so thank you for creating such an amazing story that I'm so invested in.

I'm glad to see that Justin has stepped up and taken responsibility. Sure, its a little late but he can be forgiven lol. Kiki is really going through a lot... both her and Justin are, but I think for a mother, a situation like this is worse. I'm glad Justin's there for her... but I'm getting afraid that things might go crazy again.

 

Like with Cameron, will she grow resentment towards Cheyenne and Kiki? Gah, like shes not a complete bitch, but I'm getting a strange vibe from her. Like maybe shes being TOO nice about this situation. I think it's a matter of time before she freaks... but I'm speculating. lol. Anyway, I love this story... so you'd better update soon. :D



Author's Response: I had a feeling that was you! I was so humbled by the shout out because your stories are my favorites. I freak out just like you when you update. I'm a fan of a fan. LoL.....What Justin has done can never be forgotten, but it can be forgiven and he is definitely on the way to redemption. And its going to be a bumpy road, he's going to be tested to see if he can handle the pressure. But he's not going to be the only one - that strength that Kiki's known for its about to be shaken even more. Like you said, for a mother, especially a formerly single mother, watching Cheyenne suffer is really going to hit her hard......Ms. Diaz is a question mark at this point in the story - is she going to be a problem or not? And if she's not going to be a problem, is that because she's going to go with the flow and accept the situation for what it is or because she's going to be bumped out of the picture?.....Only time will tell. Thank you so much for being one of my biggest support. You're the bomb!!!



DaniD (Signed) on Apr 17, 2008 04:11 pm (Good Morning!)

I declare this a holiday...it happens every so often and when it does it's very special. It's called "Spoiled" by LuLu Day!   LOL  Yay...!!!!

Ok..Looks as if Justin is getting a crash course in being Daddy. Not only that...this family suite..it's forcing them to interact as a family unit. Very interesting.

Justin has to be completly humbled by the proof that everyone believed he would come around eventually. I am cringing just thinking about sweet little Cheyenne going through chemo. It's going to be hard on everyone..but I think it might just about kill Kiki.

As always..your writing is touching and wonderful. It hits the heart right where it hurts. BTW that was a compiment!  :D

 



Author's Response: I took it as a compliment, so thank you. I swear I crack up when I read your reviews. Hopefully the next "Spoiled" Day won't take so long to happen again. Yes this experience not only had opened Justin's eyes to his responsibilities to Cheyenne, but he's also learning how to be a father and how to interact with his child. I think he's doing a pretty good job and luckily Cheyenne is really connecting with him. The Elmo Room - they're looking like a happy family already now aren't they? ;) Now on to the sad stuff - yes that happy little family they are starting to become is going to go through some hard times. Hopefully they'll get through it all still intact. As always, thanks for the awesome review Dani!





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