Comments For Spoiled
lyss2118 (Signed) on May 08, 2008 01:05 am (In Treatment: The Good and Not So Good Times)
looooooooved it. amazing :)

Author's Response: I'm happy to hear you're enjoying the story. Thanx for the R&R!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on May 03, 2008 11:30 pm (In Treatment: The Good and Not So Good Times)
I'm glad that they cleared the air between themselves. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I love this, PMS.

Author's Response: Some of the air has been cleared. But Justin and Kiki still have one more part of their past to straighten out. Thanx 4 reviewing!



champ (Signed) on May 02, 2008 02:59 pm (In Treatment: The Good and Not So Good Times)
great update...hope you update soon!!


Author's Response: Thanx, I'm glad you liked it. I'm working on the next chappie already, so stay tuned ;) Thanx 4 the R&R!



DaniD (Signed) on May 01, 2008 06:13 pm (In Treatment: The Good and Not So Good Times)

Update time!!

 Well this was a pretty pivatol chapter. Lots of things were finally...FINALLY addressed after almost two years. It was time..

I'm happy they had that talk but I still feel that there is something unresolved between Justin and Kiki...baby aside. WHY he broke up with her and basically broke her heart. He never answered for that, and I guess with Kiki getting pregnant it became a secondary issue..but I still feel like it's an issue he never answered for.

Poor Cheyenne..What she's going through is just heartbreaking. Just imagining her little body that sick..*sniff*

Once again, you've outdone yourself!

Dani 



Author's Response: You are absolutely right, this chapter was an important one in regards to Justin and Kiki's relationship outside of their bond as parents. Now that the most important issue between them - Justin's absence from Cheyenne's life - has been settled the second one is starting to resurface. Its going to take some time for it to get to the point where they have to address the downfall of their past relationship - Cheyenne's still gotta get her transplant and changes in their lives outside of the hospital have to be made, but there are definitely questions (unresolved feelings prehaps ;) ) that still need to be answered. And they most certainly will be answered. Thanx for reviewing!!!!



lostinadreamx (Signed) on May 01, 2008 11:25 am (In Treatment: The Good and Not So Good Times)

OMG. Girl, that scene with Cheyenne sick and suffering had me on the verge of tears. That poor little girl. God, poor Kiki and Justin. It's tough for any parent to watch their kid going through hell. Thankfully Justin's got his shit together and he's there for the both of them. They both really need him.

Justin as a Dad is adorable. I loved the little puzzle scene.

Let me say, that ending is a tease. It's obvious that theres still chemistry between Justin and Kiki. I just wanted them to kiss and become that happy little family. Ugh, girl you need to make that happen! I'm counting on you! lol.



Author's Response: I know I was even depressed when I was writing the chapter. Luckily Cheyenne has a lot of people willing to do whatever necessary to get her through her treatment, especially her parents. Justin and Kiki are dealing with a very overwhelming situation, but now that they - Kiki in particular - are concsious of the fact that they have each other to turn to, its not as hard for them to keep it together for the rest of Cheyenne's battle......Justin is shifting very well into his new role as a Daddy and more importantly, he's loving it.......Now the end, well the whole chapter really, shows that Justin and Kiki are reconnection, building a relationship rather than just existing as two people who happen to have a child. Now as far as chemistry goes....well....let's just say the gas has been turned back on and now the fire's just waitin' to be lit. When is that gonna happen? *Shrug* Gotta wait and see. I can tell you that you can most definitely count on me girl ;) Thanx for your review!!!





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