Comments For Spoiled
kahnechick85 (Signed) on May 26, 2008 10:19 am (In Treatment Part II: Better Days Ahead)
I love this, I'm glad that things are getting better and the family accepted Justin in as a part of Pixie's life. PMS

Author's Response: The inner circle is finally whole now that Justin's got his act together and had made his piece with them all. One drama has been settled, but another one is on the horizon ;) Thanx 4 reviewing my 100th review (Woohoo I'm so excited) LoL! :D



alimera (Signed) on May 24, 2008 05:09 pm (In Treatment Part II: Better Days Ahead)
Wow...I just found this story and it took me a while to get through it all...it is AMAZING! Poor little Cheyenne--I hope her chemo goes well and Justin's bone marrow makes her all better! And of course, I am rooting big time for Kiki and him to get back together. I can't wait to read more...please update again soon!

Author's Response: YaY! I gotta new reader! Welcome! I'm glad you're enjoying my story. Yeah Cheyenne is definitely going through the fight of her life, but even at a young age, she's strong partly due to the loving parents and family that she has. Luckily she's almost at the finish line and with her Daddy as her own personal hero, she's looking very much like a winner. I hope you stick around because when it comes to Justin and Kiki they're coming closer and closer to having to deal with their own personal issues. So root away for a reunion, hopefully those two crazy kids will get their act together. Thanx 4 the R&R!



DaniD (Signed) on May 23, 2008 10:16 pm (In Treatment Part II: Better Days Ahead)
Hello darlin'..So happy to see an update!

OK..first..Grandpa Wilson was awesome..He sure put Kiki's Dad and Brother in their place! It was still good that they got to vent out on Justin though..There was a lot of supressed anger..now the air is truly cleared.

Ok..I would say that Justin got a case of the green Monster when Shai came to visit Kiki. I liked it so well..I wouldn't mind seeing a little more jealouse Justin. Since he's the one that ended things..it's nice to see him like that. Whether he want to admit how he feels about Kiki or not..he can't hide that jealousy! LOL

Very touching scene when Cheyenne's little buddy came to visit her. I'm so wanting her to get well in this story!

Fantastic update..and I can't wait for more :D

Author's Response: Well as we knew Justin definitely has experience with the Green Eyed Monster when it comes to Kiki and now that he's back in her life, that green tint in his eyes is only going to get darker. A lot of the air concerning Cheyenne is getting clearer, but the air between her parents is only going to get thick. The second issue between Justin and Kiki is about to take the forefront. So stay tuned! Thanx girl for the review!



MissM69 (Signed) on May 23, 2008 11:06 am (In Treatment Part II: Better Days Ahead)
sweet and touching update can't wait to read the next :)

Author's Response: Yup like the chapter title said: better days ahead. Justin, Kiki and especially Cheyenne are about to get a little repreive from all the drama. Thanx for the review!



lostinadreamx (Signed) on May 23, 2008 09:11 am (In Treatment Part II: Better Days Ahead)
Ohh that was so good! I was definitely missing this story and I'm really glad I finally got my fix! Keep them updates coming, girl! lol

anyway, I love Wilson. He's just so wise and I loved how Freddy and Derek just closed their mouths when he intercepted. He's just awesome! The fact is, Justin messed up, but he's awknowledging it and he is truly sorry. They really shouldn't have belittled him but thank God for Wilson. He really ended all that tension.

Now.. while Shai is extremely sexy... I have a bit of a bad feeling about him. I'm getting this vibe that someone is about to spill the news about Cheyenne. I'm wondering if its going to be Shai or Cameron. Cameron is the bitter girlfriend and Shai is the longing ex... it makes sense. Either way, its going to either push or pull Kiki and Justin. I'm hoping it pushes them together.

Might I say, I'd like to slap Justin. It's okay for him to have a girl... but he suddenly gets jealous when Kiki is with someone?! Oh he's such a hypocrite! You know... if he was smart he'd think.. "hmm... im jealous that the mother of my child is possibly dating someone... does that mean maybe i have feelings for her?!" of course not though. men are so oblivious. lol

and the fact that justin just showed up in the hospital right after the premere. he definitely has his priorities straight... he just needs to see them. kiki definitely does and i think its shocking her. dedicated justin is not one shes used to.

I want them together already! lol :( Make cameron go away haha. :D Update soon please!

Author's Response: Girl, I was missing my own story. I just had no motivation even though I wanted to finish this chapter. Finally I found some drive and got it done. Hopefully my next update will go a little smoother. My creative juices feel like their flowing pretty good right now lol.rnrnOne of the reasons Kiki is so close to her grandfather is because they're a lot of like. They both cut through the BS and are quick to put people in check when they are not acting right. Both Wilson and Kiki don't hesitate to crack that whip especially at their family hot heads - Freddy and Derek.rnrnShai and Cameron....Yes they could cause some problems for Justin and Kiki. It definitely wouldn’t be in the form of spilling the beans though. Those two aren’t crazy enough to do that. Justin and Kiki would – channeling Tanisha from Bad Girls Club here – pop off. LoL (This season kicked ass with her on it). If anything Shai just created a catalyst for Justin. Like you said he was jealous and soon or later he's going to start connecting the dots when it comes to his emotions towards Kiki. Its not that he's doesn't feel anything for her, its just that he kind of cut himself off from those feelings. Shai's just one of the things that are going to force him to start facing them. But will Cameron hinder that? Well she's basically the rebound girl and we all know what happens to the rebound girl ;) rnrnI just love your reviews and the way you interpret the characters and their interactions. Thanx for your awesome support :D





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