Comments For Spoiled
lostinadreamx (Signed) on Jul 11, 2008 10:36 pm (Going Public)
Thanks for getting me excited. lol ;)

Author's Response: Oh you are welcomed babe ;) LoL. You are trip girl.

Hopefully I'm be able to stir up some real excitment soon with an actual update.




alimera (Signed) on Jul 05, 2008 09:57 pm (Going Public)
Hmm, I think I would be one of the fans that roots for Justin and his family, definitely. Update again soon!

Author's Response: Oh yeah I'd be team Justin and Kiki too, but then again I'm kind of bias aren't I? ;) LoL. Thanx 4 reviewing!!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jul 05, 2008 04:09 pm (Going Public)
I'm glad that Justin owned up to his mistakes and didn't try to pretend he didn't screw up. I think Justin and Cheyenne are so cute together. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. PMS

Author's Response: Justin has really changed as a person now that he's a father, an active father. He's finally become a real man and that's something worth giving him his props.

I adore the relationship that Justin and Cheyenne have. The two of them have formed such a strong connection already and its only getting stronger. Cheyenne is turning into a little Daddy's girl with Justin wrapped tight around her little finger and he loves it.

Thanks again for your support through all your reviews!




lostinadreamx (Signed) on Jul 04, 2008 08:50 pm (Going Public)

Ahh this was a good chapter. It was nice to see Justin manning up to his mistakes. He was right in the sense that people seemed to humanize him. He's a normal man who makes normal mistakes... instead of some superhuman person who is perfect.

Anyways... I think the whole birthday scene of Justin especially loving to spend time with Kiki and Cheyenne was just showing Justin's true feelings. Honestly, Cameron is just a piece of ass to Justin... he has needs as all men do and she's filling that for him. He obviously connects on a higher level with Kiki and also has something special in common with her... Cheyenne.

The paparazzi thing was some bullshit! I got so riled up reading that! It was a total invasion of privacy and personal space. I wouldn't have blamed Kiki for punching that guy out. What a smart ass! I love how Justin came to Kiki and Cheyenne's defense. He got so angry for them... it shows his TRUE feelings.

I want that family back together... make it happen pwease. lmao. Amazing chapter as usual... update soon!



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked this chapter. I thought it was a little filler-ish, but necessary for the story.

This chapter definitely showed how much Justin has changed. He's manned up and taken charge of his life and his career. But he still needs to take charge of one more part of his life. Hmm I would what that, or better yet who that is? ;) LoL.

I can't say that your description of Cameron is wrong. Hers and Justin's relationship doesn't have a lot of substance to it. You're right he does have a stronger,, much stronger, connection with Kiki, a child that bonds them for life, and remember the two of them had a strong physical attraction back in the day.

Now as far as the family being reunited....Patience is a virtue. Hehehehe

Thanx for another great review girl!

Oh and I almost forget - yeah I saw 30 Seconds to Mars a few years ago with Flyleaf opening for them actually. They were both awesome! Jared sounded and looked all kinds of good! LoL. I've been a Flyleaf fan ever since, but I'd been a 30 Seconds to Mars fan since their first album - a Jared Leto fan since My So Called Life (Why oh why did they cancel that show?!). You're probably gonna want to throw eggs at me but I gotta tell you this. My ticket for the show cost 94 cents. *Running for cover*




DaniD (Signed) on Jul 04, 2008 07:30 pm (Going Public)

Phew! That was not easy for anyone... You did so well with the reactions of all the fans, media, the record execs...I'm so proud of you! LOL I can really tell how much thought you put into making this story as realistic as possible.

LOVE Kiki more than ever..I've always adored strong characters, and the girl is certainly that. BTW..her reaction to Justin trying to bring up the past was quit interesting. She has totally forgave him for not stepping up with Cheyenne..she couldn't be more supportive otherwise...BUT..Justin REALLY hurt her deeply when he broke her heart.

She had a pregnancy and a baby to prepare for soon after the break up..I don't think she ever had a chance to come to terms with what happened. She is a woman who loved a man, and he stomped on what they had. She never got to move on...Not even with a rebound relationship. Wonder if Justin will realize that he's NOT forgiven for THAT part of it?


I say, Come ooonnnn....Give Kiki a lvoe interest!!!!! lol  I want to see jealous Justin! lol

Wonderful update!

 



Author's Response: Aww *big hug* thank you so much. My aim for this chapter was to be as realistic as possible with the public's reaction. I'm so happy I got that across *doing a happy dance* LoL.

I'm a fan of strong female character too, in movies and stories, so from the start my plan was to definitely have Kiki fit that bill. She is not one to play with. LoL

OMG girl are you like psychic? You nailed it! That is exactly what Kiki went through. It was like one on top of the other - a broke heart and then boom she's pregnant by the person who broke her heart. She had to make a choice, which was more important, breaking down and possibly hurting herself and her baby or staying strong and health in every aspect for herself and her baby. She choose to bury her heartache and do what she had to for her child. But burying it does not mean she really dealt with it. There are still a lot of emotions inside Kiki and Justin too that have to come to the surface. There is still drama left to unfold and don't worry that includes a visit from Green Eyed Justin. :D

Thanx 4 reviewing Miss Cleo! LoL.




LaLa (Signed) on Jul 04, 2008 01:58 pm (Going Public)
I love this story and can't wait to read the next chapter.

Author's Response: Thanx for reading and reviewing!





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