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a_moments_grace (Signed) on Jul 27, 2008 07:59 pm (A Family Reunion - Yeahs! & Uh Ohs)
It's really cute to see Justin being a good dad to Cheyenne...and you've done a wonderful job with this story :)

Author's Response: Justin had made some solid strides in going from deadbeat dad to best daddy in the world to Cheyenne. She adores him and he adores her. I think their relationship is too cute. Thank you so much, I'm glad your enjoying my story! And thanx for the review. I think you were one of my first reviewers and I'm so happy to see your still a fan.



lostinadreamx (Signed) on Jul 26, 2008 09:36 am (A Family Reunion - Yeahs! & Uh Ohs)

Alright, let me start by saying that all of these Cheyenne, Justin, Kiki moments make me want this family reunited properly. It's just funny how everyone else, including both their families, see that Kiki and Justin still have feelings for eachother, (Justin is the obvious one) yet neither will act on these feelings. Ugh! Justin needs to dump Cameron and go for the girl he really cares about. I thought it was funny too how Cameron was brought up and he seemed unhappy about the question. I don't think it was only because of the person asking it, but because he forgets she exists when he';s with Kiki and Chey.

Now, Rachel was EXTREMELY out of line, but I'm happy that Justin stood up for the mother of his child. Lynn and Sadie standing up for her in front of the whole family was nice too. They truly accept Kiki into the family... and I think Cameron or any girl thereafter will have tough shoes to fill.

THe flashback was cute too. About them singing as they got off the plane. They both have ssuch vivid memories about how they dated, yet they joke about it b/c it's so awkward to bring up. They need to talk it through soon. OH! and Justin and that chick that was all over him. I was like WTF. lol. I think Kiki saying she can have you really did bother him a little. But of course, he won't say anything.

I'm thinking Lynn and Sadie need to intervien to get these two back together. lol Anyway, i loved this update. Very cute!



Author's Response: It is very obvious that Justin and Kiki should be together especially with deep feelings still exist between them. It is definitely more apparent with Justin, but Kiki - she's almost in denial about how she feels in regard to him. That's one of the bumps that they have to get past first before the runite. Their "friendship" facade is going to start sporting some cracks ;)

You're absolutely right. Cameron in no way compares to Kiki. I mean Lynn and Paul are the only people in Justin's family that have met her - what does that tell you?

Thanx for reviewing and about the Photoshop offer - I accept! I don't have Photoshop right now so I would definitely appreciate a Justin/Kiki picture. Thanx a bunch!




alimera (Signed) on Jul 26, 2008 09:24 am (A Family Reunion - Yeahs! & Uh Ohs)
Aww, that was cute. I'm happy Justin finally talked to his dad. I want Kiki and Justin to realize they should be together soon though...work on that! Lol, kidding, it's your story. Update again soon!

Author's Response: That reconciliation was way over due and Kiki had the magic touch to make it happen. Oh I'm definitely working on the reunion, but Justin and Kiki are a stubborn bunch. Especially that Kiki hint, hint ;). Thanx for your review!



kahnechick85 (Signed) on Jul 25, 2008 10:13 am (A Family Reunion - Yeahs! & Uh Ohs)
I'm glad things went so well with his family. I can't wait to see what's gonna happen next. I love this, PMS.

Author's Response: Yeah that family reunion could have gone really bad LoL. Thanx 4 reading and reviewing!



DaniD (Signed) on Jul 25, 2008 10:10 am (A Family Reunion - Yeahs! & Uh Ohs)

Both chapters are just wow worthy hon! 

Reading...all I could think was that Justin, Kiki and Cheyenne just FELT like a little core family. I know they are family connected by Cheyenne..but it's obvious the couple connection that they always had is still alive and well. It's like what Sadie noticed...Justin well and truly responds to Kiki...he gives her the kind of respect and pull that only his Mother and his wife/significant other should have. Cameron would have never reached him in that situation.

I was amused last chapter when Kiki was complaining about Justin coming over to her house. He just can't stay away from his baby...or Kiks really. I said it before...where they are is where home is, and he knows it.

I loved Lynn so much when she stood up and made her little speech at the cookout. Justin is the Timberlake/Bomar goldenchild...and so many people were willing to turn a blind eye to anything negative and place the blame on Kiki. Case in point Rachel. I was proud of Justin for admitting how horribly he screwed up to her..and I'm not surprised that once things were settled Kiki and Rachel hit it off.

OK...There is so much more thoughts and impressions..but I'm going to stop here. Thank you for the wonderful double post! I had a blast reading them :D



Author's Response: You are so right about the family that Justin, Kiki and Cheyenne have naturally formed - it just feels right for them to be together like that. And it definitely is not all about Cheyenne. On Justin's end in particular, he has grown very attached to his new family, reattached to Kiki. Its only going to get stronger as those old feelings between him and Kiki become more apparent.

Thanx for the review!






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